Steph vs. Cutie Mark

Steph vs. Cutie Mark

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Icon for Cutie Mark55.1%
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Flutterbyes
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298 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 15 2019, 02:28 PM
Nothin: Those inks and flowing curves look good. I'm not sure if you always have the best balance of values with your simple spot blacks and greys, but when the balance feels right, it looks really nice. It's too bad I couldn't see where this encounter goes...

Mister Kent: Really rocking that photocopy-able traditional comic look. I could say things about line weight, flat areas of white,  closeups, etc... but it all fits the look you have going on there and that would just be a demand to make a different kind of comic. I enjoyed the story, but I really don't know what to make of the resolution.

Reecer6
Artist
365 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 13 2019, 01:28 PM
nothin: the thinner inking here looks pretty new for you and i like how it looks! keep on keeping on my pal <3

kent: god, mark's personality is so casual yet compelling, i love seeing his encounters! good stuff!

Flytee
Community Manager
317 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 13 2019, 03:07 AM
kent- I had fun reading this, page 4 properly cracked me up and there were tons of quotable lines, as usual, your writings solid. I'm personally a fan. The art was serviceable for the story you were telling. Though I do think using dramatic angles and amping up the facial expressions could push some of your jokes even further.

Nothin- I just wish there was more! I like your art style its really fluid and has a lot of energy.

ArtsandGoodies
Artist
566 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 12 2019, 09:41 PM
Nothin: Nice to see some comics again from you, your inks are really nice and expressive and look forward to seeing some more stuff.

Kent: I like the absurd humor with the challenge becoming a pact. also the Bar in general was pretty cool. i do feel like page 6 was a much better ending than page 7, page 7 ends at an odd place with a weird joke that doesn't fully land where as page 6 has a nice resolution with them getting along after drinking a bunch at the bar.

TheCydork
Artist
606 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 9 2019, 07:56 PM
Eh I’m gonna be honest, both of these comics felt a bit underwhelming to me, sorry guys.

Nothin - I dig how expressive your style is, and the bodies are full of movement. I don’t really have much else to say though. This comic felt like it ended before anything really happened. Were there supposed to be more pages? I’d also suggest using a darker green for the text bubbles next time, because with the white text it was hard to read.

Mr Kent - “Now cockroach friendly” haha. In general I like how you portrayed this bar. I appreciate those details, the cameos and the demon (?) bartender. I really liked the first panel on page 2 where he pours the liquor. Your style of inking the characters thicker than the rest also makes the comic easy on the eyes for me.

However I.. felt like this was super played straight but not in an interesting way? They have a drinking contest, there’s a joke about how Steph will end up puking their guts out.. then they do, and that’s the end. The joke of sticking the bill on the bartender didn’t hit for me and didn’t feel like a good conclusion to the comic. Even though your comic is longer, I had the same feeling of “wait, that’s it?” on the last page.

Lucky Nothin
Artist
53 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 17 2019, 06:56 PM
what kind of deja vu is this

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