Smile / Rocio

Smile / Rocio

Smile — Rocio


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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: rocio, smile



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Kozispoon
Approval Committee
1055 comments
# 13   Posted: Nov 9 2019, 11:52 PM
I super dig this. I dig seeing Rocio as less than perfect in a purely mundane and real way. Its easy to take imperfection in a fantastic way like a bombastic temper or mysterious demonic past, but this is something unexpected and surprisingly relatable. I hope you do more of these experiments.

Heavenbat
Artist
71 comments
# 12   Posted: Oct 26 2019, 07:48 PM
Late to the party but just wanted to say, it was neat getting this little look into Rocio's background life. Though I found myself wishing a bit for some more input from Rocio; most of this comic is Ms. Vanity monologuing, which I assume was to showcase how she's sort of just steamrolling Rocio but in the end it didn't give me much of an impression on how Rocio actually.... *felt* about what Ms Vanity was saying?

That said, I love the idea of Rocio magically putting makeup on, that's such a neat concept lmao

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1436 comments
# 11   Posted: Oct 18 2019, 09:44 PM
I'm glad you guys enjoyed this, thanks for the comments

BoogidiBzdo
Artist
33 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 17 2019, 10:56 AM
This was a very well-grounded comic overall. Your line-less art style carries a lot of substance despite being line-less because all the shapes are so well drawn.  The story and dialogue are well written and engaging. Good job!

ArtsandGoodies
Approval Committee
292 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 16 2019, 10:27 PM
short and sweet, it's a great insight into a small moment in Rocio's life, I don't  have any crits but this is a nice vignette into a moment.

Rivana
Artist
52 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 14 2019, 05:41 AM
This is such a great insight in Rocio's day to day activities and her inner conflicts (or at least one of them). Everyone thinks that being a magical girl is all sparkles and  pretty stuff but nobody thinks about what happens in moments like these. Thanks for giving us this glimpse , it only made Rocio a lovable character even more.

Flutterbyes
Artist
215 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 11 2019, 10:20 AM
Rocio is a particularly tragic character to be subjected to the cold, calculating expectations of a media-focused magical girl system. It's not often that an artificial medium like comics acknowledges imperfections and makeup, either. Design itself is what makeup creates or highlights, and you had to purposely add the imperfections of a "normal" face. Although it doesn't directly tie into a storyline or contain a complete story, it is a really nice character moment on its own that deserved its own vignette instead of being shoved into a future storyline, so this was a good move.

Radji
Artist
529 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 11 2019, 09:17 AM
I know the feeling. And know the cure.

TheCydork
Artist
61 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 11 2019, 09:02 AM
Kind of sad and lovely ;; I’m really interested in whether she seems depressed because of the last battle, or if she’s felt this way the whole time and we’re up for a deeper dive into her backstory..

Flytee
Artist
61 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 11 2019, 02:24 AM
What a wonderful read.
In one page I feel like you have added layers of depth to Rocio. I'm really excited to see what you do with her in the future. Obviously as always your art and writing in on point.

Dechado
Artist
228 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 11 2019, 12:07 AM
I rarely visit VOID anymore, but I got a notification of a comic of yours, featuring Rocio.
Wasn't dissapointed to read this.

Rocio is one of my favorite characters of yours. Don't crush her. Much. :(

Heathen
Artist
334 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 10 2019, 08:15 PM
Simple and elegant. Well done.

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1436 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 10 2019, 07:14 PM
I had this scene burning in my head out of nowhere for a while, so I made this in a day. I decided against sticking it into my battle as a prologue page, I think it works better on its own

Hope you guys enjoy this brief moment about struggling to start the day~

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Oct 17th, 2019
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