Shadow of a Rival / Kubo

Shadow of a Rival / Kubo

Shadow of a Rival — Kubo

by kubo


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Page 1Page 2Page 3Page 4

Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: cassidy madson, kubo



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TheCydork
Artist
81 comments
# 6   Posted: Sep 23 2019, 03:09 AM
Aw that was surprisingly sweet! I wish we'd seen a little more of Kubo though or at least some explanation - this felt more like a Cassidy BB than a Kubo one!

ArtsandGoodies
Approval Committee
304 comments
# 5   Posted: Sep 17 2019, 07:10 PM
Kubo your art is great just want to say that first and foremost. This story is also cute little story developing Kubo as well as Cassidy. I really like the ways you play with the laytouts on the pages as well as the style of the bottom 3 panels, also the way you should the parent's relationship developing on page 3 was great as well. Good job with this small comic and look forward to seeing more of your stuff.

Heavenbat
Artist
75 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 15 2019, 04:45 PM
What an adorable story! I absolutely love page 3! The way it's set up, and the heart symbol, all make a great exposition page. The art itself is a treat to look at--honestly I can't think of anything to critique other than the small typos, but that's a serious nitpick. Great comic!! :D

Radji
Artist
534 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 15 2019, 09:13 AM
cute lil comic

Rivana
Artist
52 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 14 2019, 06:57 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this comic that I actually added  Kubo to my hitlist! Hopefully he wakes up soon and we see more of him in Void. Your art and style is amazing I have no real crit except that there are some typos in certain areas.  

Page 2 last panel. "A little harier than I expecting,oh well!"
Page 4 last panel : "Well your got away this time.."

Keep up the amazing work!

kubo
Artist
62 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 12 2019, 07:03 PM
I spoke with MrPr1993 and he is cool with me posting my part of our last battle as a BB. This takes places after his comic. Thank you all for your understanding. This move has been a lot but Im glad I could still finish this comic.

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