Jane Blonde vs. Drednaut

Jane Blonde vs. Drednaut

Jane Blonde vs. Drednaut

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# 12   Posted: Aug 17 2019, 02:50 PM
I love the old school style of comic storytelling and these two characters really exude that essence to a T.

That said, I'd have to echo what the rest already mentioned - I wish I saw more of Jane Blonde from  Kent's version. I sure hope that we see the continuation of this plot as I am curious as how it would turn out.

I love Drawdan's style as well.  It's got that shaded/painted look that I myself am planning to adapt in my own comic. My only crit is that maybe adding better contrast would add more impact to the comic as everything looked midtone-gray from afar.

All in all, I enjoyed seeing these two characters and would love to see more of them active around Void in the future!  

drawdan
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# 11   Posted: Aug 17 2019, 04:00 AM
Thx Heathen, all good suggestions.  I cant say that is entirely intentional, but I can say that that particular character/villain is not a Lex Luthor. He kinda is a regular guy thats gone down a dark path. I have plans to feature him in a Dreds beyond battle. That said, I like the idea of a close up and wish I had included that. Thx for the crit!

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# 10   Posted: Aug 17 2019, 12:08 AM
Kent: You've sidelined your own character for some random fish men! Shame.

Dan: Very nice establishing shots and panel layouts. My only real critique is that you didn't give the bald bad guy an interesting design or a close up, so while he's delivering dialog that tells us he's someone important, he just looks like a background extra, and he's shown at the least imposing or commanding angle possible. Think about how the angle and position of characters and elements in a panel inform their relationships to one another from a story and thematic standpoint, and remember: a hero is only as good as his villain!

drawdan
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# 9   Posted: Aug 16 2019, 10:11 AM
Cool angle with the old school story line. I like your sea creatures, but im a little bummed out that Jane didn't show up till the last page. I was looking forward to seeing how you handled their interaction.

drawdan
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# 8   Posted: Aug 15 2019, 09:40 PM
Uploaded,**yawn** going to bed now, looking forward to your comic Mr. Kent.

Heathen
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# 7   Posted: Aug 7 2019, 08:22 AM
A wild drawdan appeared!

drawdan
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# 6   Posted: Jul 31 2019, 10:03 AM
Sorry Kent, I had to extend. I have to go out of town the 3rd through the 7th and I wont be able to finish or upload anything.

Darius Corry
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# 5   Posted: Jul 26 2019, 11:57 AM
Two of my favorite folks! I can not wait!

drawdan
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# 4   Posted: Jul 25 2019, 01:45 PM
FYI Kent, See my last couple of battles for Dreds current look. Im working on updated model sheets now.

drawdan
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# 3   Posted: Jul 24 2019, 01:42 PM
Thx for the challenge Kent.

      Edited Jul 24 2019,  01:48 PM by drawdan

JCee
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# 2   Posted: Jul 23 2019, 06:04 PM
HYPED

Mister Kent
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# 1   Posted: Jul 23 2019, 05:54 PM
OMG This is Happening

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