Intro Story / Elijah (Eli) Mikhailov

Intro Story / Elijah (Eli) Mikhailov

Intro Story — Elijah (Eli) Mikhailov


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Heavenbat
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99 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 25 2019, 10:37 AM
YAY ELI'S IN :D
I love the monotone mood lighting you've got going on! I think you're starting to improve on making less stiff poses, but there's still definitely room for improvement--especially the panel where Eli's stumbling towards the pile of gore; it's a bit of a T&A pose, honestly, which looks a bit off given the situation?
Man, though, fantastic job on the scene where Eli slowly comes to his senses, and great job at building up that feeling of dread at the end!

ArtsandGoodies
Global Moderator
358 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 25 2019, 12:43 AM
congrats on getting him in. I do like how you're working more stuff in yoru backgrounds keep that up. I do think there could be more contrast and in general more light tones. While this looks fine on my desktop when i saw it on my phone that screen it was hard to see so some people's screens it may be harder to view. one thing you should try doing is once you have colored it is to zoom out to a view of the whole page then squint your eyes, if you're having trouble seeing the most distinct figures or what's going on in a panel you will want to up the contrast of certain parts. Overall though good job and I look forward to seeing where you take his story.

Gakken
Artist
5 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 18 2019, 05:40 PM
Looked cool~! OvO

Though gruesome, I enjoyed!

Cab
Artist
29 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 18 2019, 05:35 PM
ooh, a nice and ominous beginning to Eli's tale, I'm invested I wanna see where this goes, good job buggy :-)

SnowyMoth
Artist
19 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 18 2019, 02:34 PM
This is a really interesting intro story, and I love the eerie feel of it all. I have a little bit of a problem seeing the details in the third page, but I think the intro is fantastic. ( :

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