Johnny Cool: Vs. Mr. Murder / Johnny Cool

Johnny Cool: Vs. Mr. Murder / Johnny Cool

Johnny Cool: Vs. Mr. Murder — Johnny Cool


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ArtsandGoodies
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342 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 17 2019, 10:53 PM
It's cool to see an unfinished battle brought back completed as a BB. I enjoy the way you drew Mr Murder in this, though it seems most of the pages are uploaded a bit small. Page 3 is my favorite, I love heavy inks and i really like the way you drew Johnny Cools pants and shoes. blackspotting is something I wanna learn and can always appreciate when others do it in their comics. Also Johnny Cool is a character I really want to interact with Harlow at some point.

PyrasTerran
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1441 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 13 2019, 04:58 PM
Yas I am all about artists finishing and posting past comics they couldn't

3rd page is much bigger than the others for some reason?

watch out with your 180 degree action senses, the 4th page breaks the flow by having opposing characters facing the same direction in panel, making it difficult to understand who is facing where in the room

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jul 20th, 2019
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