Rocio vs. Click Lyric

Rocio vs. Click Lyric

Rocio vs. Click Lyric

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ArtsandGoodies
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# 6   Posted: Jul 17 2019, 10:02 PM
Pyras: your layouts are geting so great for your webscrolls you have some of the best infinite scroll on the site. I also love your colors and style in general. to echo what Elyan said one background where the lack of depth sort of stands out is the first panel on page 2 the red doesn't quite look like rugs but part of a pattern on the floor, maybe an outline or some slight shading will help seperate background elements like this. I also like how even though the food was a main part of the story it wasn't really about all the details of making it step by step food porn way, Personally i just don't like that stuff and seeing it take a backseat to the friendship that formed from it is really nice.

Tech: Your style and stuff is always a treat to see I love the joke with Rocio literally turning down her radiance. Since you do great pencils you should colab with some other artists to do inks so we can see cleaner versions or also seeing your color stuff because your single color pieces are fantastic if you took your time with a BB to do that style that would be awesome.

      Edited Jul 17 2019,  10:04 PM by ArtsandGoodies

SnowyMoth
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# 5   Posted: Jul 17 2019, 09:01 PM
Pyras - I really like how you paced your comic in this longer style, and the story was such a fun read!

Tech - I really liked your expressions and posing in this, I wish that you'd been able to finish it!

Julz
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# 4   Posted: Jul 14 2019, 06:41 PM
*Cries in Arepa*
Seriously though, Pyras you got story and quality art here. you should really kick off some kind of personal project, even if you might not have help at first, you should really just start something!

      Edited Jul 14 2019,  07:23 PM by Julz

Elyan
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# 3   Posted: Jul 14 2019, 10:24 AM
Tech, this was really sweet to read. A little short but i take what you got done :D I hope we see a finished comic from you next time!

Pyras, damn this was a awesome ride. I was so seamlessly carried along your story the ending struck me by surprise. The only thing that I miss is a little more depth/layered effect on your backgrounds and scenes. Your style is so unique its hard to even point it out properly. let me try with page 5 panel 2 or 3. Your rooms are layed out clear and crisp. Those flat color techniques are so effective but here it lacks the appropriate depth. Some basic gradient shading would maybe fix it easily. on the other hand i guess thats probably just due to time constraint.
Again your storytelling is awesome and I really really like Rocio.

Shen
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# 2   Posted: Jul 13 2019, 05:07 PM
Tech, you seem determined to never properly finish a comic lol! despite that its always a treat to see you battle because you have so much energy to your style. i LOVE the panel where Rocio magnificently bursts in in all her magical glory, and the very last panel was absolute gold, had be rollin'! My only real crit- besides being unfinished- is you use a lot of closeups and midshots, it would be better sometimes to pull some shots out to show the environment some.

Pyras: Youre really nailing this infinite canvas style! Being able to do it all lineless is a skill i've yet to master myself, im impressed! I think your colour palettes are improving too, they have a more unified look to them. The shadow demons when she was attacking were really damn cool. Honestly offhand Im not even really super sure what to crit, this was a nice friendship story with some cultural education and an awesome horror scene lol. Kudos!

Kozispoon
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1046 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 29 2019, 03:21 AM
This is such an unexpected match up, but I am ready for it =D

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Jul 17th, 2019
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