Intro Story / Charlie Rosenberg

Intro Story / Charlie Rosenberg

Intro Story — Charlie Rosenberg

by Badger

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Brobin_Dragon
Artist
46 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 13 2019, 06:28 PM
Love the design! :D She looks cool!

Heathen
Artist
407 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 12 2019, 05:19 PM
Great intro! Very solid execution all around.

cats
Artist
40 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 11 2019, 10:37 PM
I'm so happy to see Charlie! Congrats on getting her in
Not much to say but that final page was absolutely stunning!! Great job and I can't wait to see her first battle

SirJellyRaptor
Artist
61 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 11 2019, 08:41 AM
WOOF COP! WOOF COP!

Heavenbat
Artist
146 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 11 2019, 12:28 AM
I LOVE HER!!!
The lighting in this is so good omg. And I friggin love that bait-and-switch with the ending. Totally setting it up so it seems like she's gonna eat him but then nope, just "Sir ur under arrest" while she takes his gun. Comedy GOLD, had me wheeze-laughing. I cannot WAIT to see more of her omg

TheCydork
Artist
341 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 10 2019, 08:44 PM
Loved this! Can’t think of any critique :) I especially loved the last page, Charlie’s werewolf form is A+ and I love how it looks like she’s going to eat him, but just arrests him instead, it’s pretty funny haha

Petrichor
Artist
50 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 10 2019, 12:27 PM
Easily one of my top fave characters now <3
Your art style is 10/10 and your choice of colors are perfect for this dark setting.
I see you have a great notion of perspective and anatomy as well!
Oh and i love that she can control her transformation and uses her abilities on her job, can't wait to see more of your work!!

Happy December 4th! ACAB -Reecer6
Artist
318 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 10 2019, 02:10 AM
Ooh, this is a subtle yet strong introduction!

I love the transformation shots of course, and the rough linework and subtle movement lines of the action panels are great! The anticlimax got me - I'm too used to werewolves that just have no dang control over themselves, it's great Charlie has some friggin' discipline <.<

I was going to complain about the house being a bit bare, but, you know, it was robbed. Fair enough.

Flutterbyes
Artist
283 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 9 2019, 06:49 PM
Oooh, you're rocking the eerie yellow light here. I like how it warms up just before the final panel, too.

Brobin_Dragon
Artist
46 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 9 2019, 01:31 AM
Love the design! :D She looks cool!

Pita
Think Tank
209 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 7 2019, 08:00 AM
I'm gay for this cop.

Woof.

Hellis
Artist
260 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 7 2019, 01:21 AM
I love her so much. My one complain is that the backgrounds are a bit basic, and could have used a little extra work. But your colors are so strong and complementary that I didnt think about it the first readthrough. Good job on getting her in!

Elyan
Artist
115 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 6 2019, 09:56 AM
I love her!!! Congrats on getting her in and booooy is that an intro.
Execution is great especially on the color palette you used.
A neat little intro that gives enough info about Charlie to work with her.
Well done!

SnowyMoth
Artist
58 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 5 2019, 09:54 PM
I love her! She seems really fun!

Energy
Artist
135 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 5 2019, 01:19 PM
She's in!  Congrats!  I really like how you convey the night scene here and the lighting effects.  I hope to see more of her in the future.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
475 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 5 2019, 12:16 PM
Congrats on getting her in. I love your colors in this and how you use the yellow as spoting out the areas of light it looks super good.

Dechado
Artist
250 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 5 2019, 12:09 PM
I LOVE HER! @w@

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