Invitational Tournament 2019: Round 1 / Mary vs. Vii

Invitational Tournament 2019: Round 1 / Mary vs. Vii

Invitational Tournament 2019: Round 1 — Mary vs. Vii

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Jade★
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# 5   Posted: Jun 17 2019, 07:54 PM
I love the slapstick, cartoony humor of this comic! Definitely feels rushed, so I hope you put your best foot forward in the next round!

DaVinx, sad things didn't work out this round, but I hope we get to see more of out outside of the Invitational!

Flutterbyes
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# 4   Posted: Jun 15 2019, 12:57 PM
Marymuscle: Mary's a fun character! It looks like your images came out a little on the big side, which makes them awkward to view in a browser. It's something to watch out for, but it happens all the time. The gags were a lot of fun, and as for the ending, you can't beat the classics, can you? This comic is composed of mostly medium and close shots one after another, so it would be good to try to break out of that and give the characters some more room sometimes. Also, for next time, see if you can get some neater comic panel ruling, preferably with a gutter (do you have a T-square or a transparent ruler with a grid?). Also, since you seem to be doing the lettering by hand, now's the time to do some slow, deliberate comic book lettering (it's something of a lost art these days).

jv7x
Artist
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# 3   Posted: Jun 12 2019, 12:20 AM
Great match up in terms of powersets.  I would have loved to see both sides of the battle.  Marymuscle congrats on the win!

Kozispoon
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# 2   Posted: Jun 11 2019, 08:50 PM
This bendy rubbery gal. I dig you actually made her a rubber ball for some of the action sequences- hilarious! your pages are pretty huge, so it took a bit of scrolling around to see everything, but what you busted out in a weeks time is definitely a great start. Grats on the win and I look forward to seeing who you get matched up with next round!

MrPr1993
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# 1   Posted: Jun 3 2019, 07:49 AM
This'll be fun UwU

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jun 17th, 2019
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Winner: marymuscle
 

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