Croco: the style you used for this comic looks really cool and I especially like the look this gave us into the character of croco, it definitely creates interest for croco’s future of settling in void!

Sean: that sucks to hear about all the dumb computer stuff, hopefully the next one is less of a pain.

Croco: good job on being able to have a comic you can upload. although you accidentally used the wrong size just an easy fix to make sure your submitted comics in future battles are at 1000 Px wide. In terms of the comic I enjoyed the development you had for croco  in this. In particular you had a lot of good expressions for him in this comic. Talking with you a bunch while making this comic I know the main issue you need to work on is getting a handle on your anxiety and not let it stop you. The sites for getting better and we all have different things we need to improve on, in your case it's not letting anxiety result in  procrastination, but that's what void is for, getting over artistic humps wether mental or technical and I look forward to seeing your future stuff.

Croco, i really like the kinda impressionist style where theres a lot of emphasis on light and shadow. It looks really cool, even if you didnt have a lot of time to polish it

Asto, sorry to hear about your computer troubles brother.  Tough break.  Hope you're able to get back up and running soon.

Croc- I'm liking the character development, can't wait to learn more about him.  It is a shame that the story suffered so bad from the omitted dialogue, I struggled with that as well.  I like what I see.  I typed out some ideas to improve your visual storytelling going forward but then saw your request for no critique.

Sean, too bad you had ‘puter troubles, man! I’ll take the beer, but you know the best way to make it up is to post that beyond battle when you’re able

Croco, if you have a script, make sure you letter the whole thing before tightening your art, so at the very least all the text is there. I’m glad only a couple pages were missing dialog though, so it didn’t totally kill readability. I really like your characterizations here, your dialog is really natural. Croco clearly wants to connect, but has built this armor around himself, and I’m eager to see where his interactions with Void’s other denizens will push him.

croco, your story helped fleshing out the character for me. I hope next time you manage to put all the dialogues

Well, major bad news. Not going to be able to submit anything for this. My laptop broke about a week ago and I won't be able to afford to fix it till the new year. With that said, I deeply apologize to everyone, especially Stylo. I'm sorry my dude. I promise to make it up to ya'll somehow. I'll buy everyone a beer. One beer to share between the dozens of you.

HAPPY NEW YEAR...

Love a good Harvey comic and our new Croc boy!? How can you get so lucky!

Best of luck guys!

Let's go!! Scale Vs Hair!!

Kill it guys, looking forward to seeing what ya'll come up with!

STOKED! Good luck on your first battle Crocostyle