Coalar vs. Kyosho

Coalar vs. Kyosho

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Rtv!
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603 comments
# 22   Posted: Jun 19 2008, 07:04 PM
Wow..Kyosho is weeded out of existence.
You are hereby forgiven.

Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 21  
Ghost Writer, Word.  He beat yer ass Roady.

Blindeye
Artist
59 comments
# 20  
Kyosho. Good look to those lines, keep that up. A littlem more depth and shade could make it look awesome. Nice story, it made me laugh with the "one panel left" thing. A few low blows with the other character's inner dialogue but whatever.

Coalar: Did I say low blows? I never liked making fun of the other fighter. Yeah, yeah, street fighter gags and all, but it was one sided "my character is cooler than his" stuff. It took me a while to get the photoshop gag, kinda out of no where and obscure. Breaks the 4th wall down. Try practicing some more with porportion depth and structure, the character's look modeled out of clay. Hmmm, were you the one who enjoyed that medium as well? If that's what you're going for than cool, but I don't know if the colours are being used to bring the characters out enough. Yeah, and the taking over the establishment thingy at the end... Also out of no where and pretty uninteresting. One knee doesn't promote you to leader... If I were under Kyosho's command I'd sooner rush his opponent en mass than feel intimidated and follow him due to one knee in the gut. Hell, he didn't even look K'O'd. Anyway, that's pretty harsh, but it's how I feel about it.

Good fights by all, really down to the photo-finish here.

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 19  
Lot of good points Skull, and yes I do agree with many of them. That aside, I didn\'t just try to cram in any insult I could think of, and it\'s more of my \"longwindedness\" which I feel tend to happen when I write. A few of my jokes I should have cut short, or shouldn\'t have included at all in the end, but there is nothing I can do about that now I suppose. As for the \"influence\" thing before, I still have my suspicions, sorry but that\'s just how it is and it won\'t change, whether I win or lose this match.

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
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463 comments
# 18  
Well, here I am finally showing my face. First off, I just want to say to Kyosho, dude, its not worth getting into a flame war over. Remembe when you and me got into it? Toast said if he saw that again, al those involved would be booted. So, dude, its cool, ok? I know you aren't doing what hes accused you of, so just ignore it, and watch the votes. Don't let him get to you.
As for the fights themselves, I'd have to agree with my pal Chris (Kohinar), even IF he thought Peeing on Dan's head was a good idea.... ;-).
Anyways, Kyosho, yours looked better in my opinion. True, it reminded me of a coloring book in that it was a bit simple, and there wasnt any shading or toning, but these things come in time. With inking skills like that, I know it would be easy for you, were more time put into it. Good job man. (bet you never thought you'd hear me say that, did ya?) The story was also funny, and well played out.
Roadmaster, I was expecting a bit more from you, after your fight with dalar. That one wa really good. This one was really jumbled, and tried to fit too many mean comments and too many low blows in, sorry man. It was funny at places, but also hard to follow. I like your stuff man, but Kyosho has you a bit 1uped in the proportion department. Not that thats a bad thing, it will come in time. I have to say this though. The whole "I'm mean, thats who I am, thats the way I talk to people. I make fun of them" Attitude REALLY turned me off. I mean, its like the whole purpose of this fight wasnt to win, or to showcase well done art, or to even ReALLY get a point across... it was to say as many mean things about your opponent as possible. Like, it was slightly ammusing the first 15 times, but after that.... it got old man. I would rather have seen a mor thought out story, with more plotting, and less prodding. But the making fun of is what stuck out the most to me, so in my mine, Kyosho is the winner overall.

Good work overall to both of you. Room for improvement on both parts, but still good stuff guys.

-Peace

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 17  
Hey, thanks! Glad you liked it.

As for you RoadMaster. You have to be the MOST paranoid person alive. I do NOT talk to anyone outside of Void trying to "sway" their votes. Like I've said before, I just want people to vote. So cut the crap! Just cause he said he liked mine better. WTF is wrong with you? PLEASE don't post again or this will turn into a huge flame war.

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 16  
since I\'m starting to see a bit of a trend I\'ll just keep this comment short. Those of you who are having \"chit chats\" with Kyosho (and I know a few people who definately have who shall remain nameless) make sure you get both sides of the story before you decide to make a bias one way or the other. I don\'t think either side should lose due to out-of-fight circumstances or influence. And no before you get your panties in a knot, I\'m not referring to a specific person here, so don\'t blow yer tops

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 15  
I wouldn\'t whine too much Kyosho, I passed you at like 0.3% at a time from votes, and now suddenly and seemingly from a single person voting, I\'ve gone down by 2% and am now losing again.

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 14  
Wow, I\'m losing...this sucks.

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 13  
oh and for clarification on future battles, Coalar isn\'t 19, by \"young\" in his bio, I meant young by mage standards, most of the others in his \"tribe\" of magicians are old sages, wise with knowledge and power. Coalar is late 20\'s early 30\'s

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 12  
yeah I gotta work on my \"presentation\" skills at those jokes eh. It must be my poor sense of canadian humor and my longwindedness. If you don\'t know who Dan Hibiki is at all, it\'s the pink guy from Street Fighter. And sorry for the crappy background and lack of inks. I was short on time and had the choice between colour and ink, and I chose colour because it\'s my stronger point.

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 11  
ok.. i like colars coloring (Awesome), but i also like kyoshos inks....
kyosho's was funny as hell though!
and colars had good lazer beams and stuff, and some (hard to follow) funny stuff!

man im so confused now!
i hate both of you guys i hope u roast in hell

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 10  
I'm just surprised no one has commented on the fact that Coalar wears a girdle ;)

Oh, and there are secret messages throughout my fight, find them and win a prize (okay no prize, but find them anyway if you want to :P) They range from comments about my drawings to me acting mean like I always do.

Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 9  
LMFAO
omfg both those fights were great, the endings especially. I laughed my ass of at Kyosho's ending  xD  aaahhhh...fuck
And Coalar, I like how Kyosho looked in your last panel, lol
ahhh...need to see more from both of you guys

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 8  
I feel it.

Jake
Artist
78 comments
# 7  
Oooooh TENSION! Can you feel it?!

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 6  
HA HA! No I didn\'t. Sorry about the crappy inking job, too.

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 5  
If you inlucde anything about religion in your fight I\'m gunna piss on you like Spikes on Dan...

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 4  
Based on a true story!

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 3  
Sorry guys, but all the other battles are gonna be put on hold, this ones first.

Kyosho
Artist
35 comments
# 2  
Expecting WHAT to happen?

Chao-One
Artist
95 comments
# 1  
...BULLSHIT...ah well. I was expecting this to happen.

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Regular Match
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jan 29th, 2004
Votes Cast: 25
Page Views: 1620
Winner: Kyosho
 

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