Dollhouse / Alma the Witch

Dollhouse / Alma the Witch

Dollhouse — Alma the Witch


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Astrodile
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# 6   Posted: Oct 31 2018, 05:01 PM
Fantastic collab between you two! Pyras & Stylo have already brought up their 2 cents on the lineart portion of this and I don't have much to say besides minor nitpicks with coloring that are like. As page 2's last panel onwards the direction of the light/shading becomes more inconsistent, even though there's direct light [The lamp] that itself is entirely ignored. While I understand that the process of making everything darkened within the latter panels/2 pages is to ramp up the tension/atmosphere, it's missed if everything is grayed out/darkened in the same fashion.

And I guess a question for Arts, but where will you be putting Garlands info if Harlow's character profile isn't in this shared collaboration, and if Garland is an NPC? Will you put it in his profile AFTER this comics voting week is over? Or submit a new introduction comic for Garland entirely? I know you put it in the NPC forum thread but that is an unreliable place to put it if he's going to be a reoccuring NPC in some fashion.

Crocostyle
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# 5   Posted: Oct 30 2018, 06:16 PM
Great comic!  Good job you two!

Cats, you have a fantastic inking and coloring game as always.^^  It's tough to fix imperfect anatomy while not completely deleting the sketcher's work, so I really admire your efforts preserve Arts' style.
Arts, you did good making the dialogue creepy and suspensful.  The only thing that really saddened me was the abrupt ending, but hopefully we'll see what comes of Alma and Garland later!

Desichan
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# 4   Posted: Oct 30 2018, 11:27 AM
gARLAND IS BEST CAT TEN OUTTA TEN!!!!

BEAUTIFUL COMIC. CREEPY AND CUTE!!! I LOVE IT! GARLAND HAS CUTE CREEPY FACES! 10/10

GOOD COMIC COLLAB, I LOVE THIS COMIC FRIENDS!

PyrasTerran
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# 3   Posted: Oct 30 2018, 08:04 AM
*Yes I am into this*

This is an important note for collaborators, especially for whoever is inking: One big part of your goal in the collaboration is to make the penciler's art look good or better, and especially if you find things you can enhance, to do exactly that. Cats while your inks definitely helped take Arts' drawings to beyond the extra mile, there are still some small moments that could have used a little more love and time (garland's walk in page 2 on the street is still a bit too stiff, and his hand on page 3 could use more detail for being so close up) these are however minor instances and this is still a great collaboration and I'm sure has helped you both learn a little more about the team process

(personal bias injected in this cause now there's a stronger chance for alma+gray owl comics yayaa)

yarnwitch
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277 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 30 2018, 07:14 AM
OH MAN i super loved this. Garland is fantastically creepy, and I want to know about the others, and if Alma can come back somehow in this new form but aaaaahhhhh~ I just want more!
The flashback portion was unique, but a little difficult to read for me.
Overall I DEMAND MORE. Appease the yarn!

ArtsandGoodies
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# 1   Posted: Oct 30 2018, 12:00 AM
Just to mention it here this was a collab between me and Cats featuring Alma as well as my NPC character Garland. I did the writing/sketches and flat colors and Cats did the Inks and shading.

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