This character has some seriously un-serious pontential. Ability-wise I could use some more detail about how the egg attacks work. What does it take to get you turned into an egg? Does he have to make you inhale egg-gas? Can he turn you with one touch from the attack eggs? Or is it based on some sort of spiritual strength gauge?
Comic-wise this is a solid intro. Totally dig the silly shounen parody. I just wish it was hammered in beforehand that this was a generic hero rather than afterward. Heck he could have been an actual costumed hero, just to show Egg Dealer's power through defeat! Finally some of the action was confusing, like top of pg 3 looks like eggdealer's eye belongs to the shadowy-figure. I think a behind-the-head shot would have been better for that panel.
Intro Story / ChickenMannUltra
Critiques & Comments
# 13
Posted:
Jul 16 2018, 04:04 PM
# 12
Posted:
Jul 14 2018, 07:36 PM
This is fucking amazing
# 11
Posted:
Jul 14 2018, 12:19 PM
This is the craziest concept and character theme, but I'm here for it. Welcome aboard!
# 10
Posted:
Jul 13 2018, 01:41 PM
Lol what in the... I'm into it XD
# 9
Posted:
Jul 12 2018, 09:33 AM
Thank you everyone for such a warm welcome. And thanks yarnwitch for the beautiful fanart, I wasn't expecting something like
that right out of the gate! I really appreciate it.
that right out of the gate! I really appreciate it.
# 8
Posted:
Jul 12 2018, 12:10 AM
EGGS!
# 7
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 09:45 PM
I love this! Have a fanart!
# 6
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 07:15 PM
You have eggs. I have a bird-shaped friend.
This match was written in the stars.
This match was written in the stars.
# 5
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 06:11 PM
Fight me as well please!
# 4
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 05:15 PM
This is weird and I like it.
# 3
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 05:05 PM
Welcome!
# 2
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 04:41 PM
wELCOME HAPPY TO HAVE YOU FRIEND!!!!
# 1
Posted:
Jul 11 2018, 04:26 PM
You finally got in, congrats! FIGHT ME, I'M SERIOUS
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Here's how the attack mode emanate eggs work: they can have a whole host of offensive capabilities. Most common attack is to fire a laser beam. But, they can also shape-shift into miscellaneous close-combat weapons when needed.
To get turned into an egg the opponent has to be hit by an emanate egg ability and have less willpower than the Egg Dealer, who is very strong willed. So it may take just one hit or more than one hit, it depends on the opponent.
The egg gas is just a signal that the Egg Dealer is around and it emanates from his power. It has a unique, but pungent odor, and it's sort of like a fingerprint.