Solid art. I think my only issue is that the sudden focus on the bucket with the cash in it. Given Azu's sweating, I'm guessing the money wasn't there before and was magiced in (i only guess because of the implication of the two not having money means that the current amount might not have been there a moment before)? Or maybe that that is all she made so far? It's not totally clear. We never see the bucket before that. Maybe a third page could have helped with that a bit more, or like a though 'well, at least I got enough for lunch' or something.
But yeah, aside from that (wordy) nit pick, good stuff. It's a nice moment.
Intro Story / Azu Flores
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# 5
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Jul 2 2018, 10:46 PM
# 4
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Jun 28 2018, 02:59 PM
Wah! She seems really cool, and I'm excited to see more of her in action around Void! Your art is nice and consistent too. A very pleasant read!
# 3
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Jun 28 2018, 02:32 PM
ohh i like your style! waiting to read you again
# 2
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Jun 25 2018, 03:04 PM
This art style felt so familiar to me & now I remember why! I recognize you from back in the day, hello!
Anyways, this is great looking forward to seeing more.
Anyways, this is great looking forward to seeing more.
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Jun 25 2018, 09:13 AM
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