Intro Story / Anvil

Intro Story / Anvil

Intro Story — Anvil


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zee
Artist
129 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 21 2017, 09:00 PM
Your characters and comics continue to crack me the heck up. (Also, totally love the nod back at Invyn and Jasper's realtor high-jinks.)
Can't wait to see how you write more of this absurd political humor. We need more of that.

Sean
Approval Committee
325 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 18 2017, 09:02 AM
More political comics! I love this. It's such an interesting idea! I am really excited to see where you take this character and how you plan to run the politics circle in Void City. Very interesting character design as well.
My only gripe is that weird ending of her attacking the guy bringing her dry cleaning. It feels shoehorned in for humor when it's not exactly necessary. I think showing her getting angry over the phone and then slamming it into pieces would have worked well enough to portray how disgruntled she gets when no one listens to her.

Let's get some board meetings under way, my dude!

Pocketmouse
Artist
92 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 17 2017, 12:51 AM
Another neat character! But why do her curtains 'schliiick'???? Haha!

Real talk this is a great intro for Anvil. She's defo going to be getting up to some antics. Your choice of font for your word bubbles is great and matches your style well, your colouring and shading is very strong here too. Your backgrounds are interesting and well-cared-for.

It might help you in future to use finer brushes to take away some of the heaviness your frames and characters can have.

Looking forward to her first battle already!

Camel
Artist
84 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 16 2017, 07:05 PM
This is the kind of character that you can't help but love, such a fun mix of bizarre traits. I especially love her design! can't wait to see what tammany hall hijinks she gets into

yarnwitch
Think Tank
278 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 16 2017, 06:43 PM
Omg is this based off that news article? Cause the parallels are amazing and it got a good giggle outta me.

Radji
Artist
543 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 11:59 PM
hmmmmmmmmmm..... i smell conflict of interest  with this character ! Political tensions are a fun element to use

Majikura
Artist
466 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 11:10 PM
What's this New Void City bigwig doing in Caelum? I smell scandal

Corn Of The Breads
Think Tank
142 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 05:06 PM
a very intresting juxtaposition of character traits put into one character Im excited to see what she does on the city council or why she even wanted to be on one.

Wolfbaloo
Artist
33 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 04:24 PM
Well one thing to keep in mind about this character: Do not interfere with her angry calls.

She seems like an interesting character! I look forward into seeing more of what she's like.

Happy June 6th! ACAB -Reecer6
Artist
291 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 04:23 PM
Psst! If you want your character to join the city council, or want to make an entirely new character for it, go ahead! I'm not restricting anyone from having UNCHECKED POWER OVER VOID POLICY (not canonically because nothing is canon but IF YOU OPT IN). Please don't leave me alone with all of politics forever. If you join, we can make it into an official Void gang!

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