This was a fun little story transition, and I like that we finally get to see more of the Beowulf's personality and voice (and all his weird little wulf-bots). I'm not sure I'm a fan of the 3 circular panels on page 3. They look nice, but they felt like they were just filling space so we could have the dialogue there. Karrin and Beowulf are talking about their past-conquests there, so perhaps they could have been walking through a trophy room of some sort to provide some fun teasers and provide a little extra world-building. I loved getting to see more of the ship's rooms, and your gray-tones and spot-blacks are excellent.
I'm so excited for Wulf stuff!!!
Settlin' Down / Karrin Klash
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Jun 27 2017, 04:39 PM
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Jun 26 2017, 08:58 AM
Great transition comic between the last tournament and Karrin' new arc, and your tones look great! Cant wait to see this new Wulftown!
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Jun 24 2017, 09:24 AM
hints, hints hints !!! and Wulf are supplanting the danger rangers? wow, a new era is arriving!
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It's cool that you wrapped up the TTT stuff this way, I think it's a good way to handle it for Karrin's narrative.
And, as you know, I'm glad we're going to start hearing more about Karrin's past, can't wait to see how you take it (and Wulftown) from here.