Last minute comment ahoy!
This was awesome, the engaging storyline, excellent panel flow not to mention the colors!
And it showed the huge amounts you\'ve grown since your last battle. Though I\'m with Haven on this one, your line-art needs some work and maybe you should stay off the colors for a while, you know, to catch up.
Oh, and props for making 15 fully colored pages without a deadline! (Personally I could never do that) Must\'ve taken a huge amount of time
Melancholy March / Eliza Quaille
Critiques & Comments
# 13
Posted:
Aug 23 2007, 06:49 AM
# 12
Posted:
Aug 20 2007, 11:12 AM
This is so good! I absolutely loved reading it : D good job
# 11
Posted:
Aug 17 2007, 09:07 AM
Bitter, I changed my mind. You can visit me anytime! And plz bring your talent with you <33333 You blew me.... damn! Thank you. That was so awesome.. I have no words...
# 10
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Aug 16 2007, 04:49 PM
A great emotionally engaging story, coupled with vibrant artwork. Loved it thouroughly Very nice work bittermause!
# 9
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Aug 16 2007, 10:54 AM
damn, bitter, this... was awesome
although, i\'d have to say, it would\'ve looked better if you work on your lines a bit more. i said WOW when i looked these pages, and it took me until like page 5 or so to realise it was your coloring that really made the pages
great work, though. i look forward to seeing more from you
although, i\'d have to say, it would\'ve looked better if you work on your lines a bit more. i said WOW when i looked these pages, and it took me until like page 5 or so to realise it was your coloring that really made the pages
great work, though. i look forward to seeing more from you
# 8
Posted:
Aug 16 2007, 09:26 AM
fantastic! I loved this BB so much. It was long, but I didn\'t even notice.
When I got to the end I couldn\'t help but think \"aw, that\'s it!?\"
I\'m looking VERY forward to more comics from you
When I got to the end I couldn\'t help but think \"aw, that\'s it!?\"
I\'m looking VERY forward to more comics from you
# 7
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Aug 16 2007, 07:15 AM
Mause, this was lovely =3 thanks ^^
# 6
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Aug 16 2007, 01:40 AM
God, Mause... I just keep coming back to this... I think you\'re gonna make me cry before the night ends...
# 5
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Aug 16 2007, 12:49 AM
This is well worth the wait and pain I\'ve been put through by you. It is totally amazing, and I agree with RabbitRabbit. You are going to have to do a kick ass job next time, and forever.
Your panel layout is AMAZING! Especially in...agh. There\'s way too many pages that I loved when it came to layouts, and it\'s awesome to see one of my favorite page being used as your comic\'s thumbnails. Your story is also great, and I\'m fucking hot for Rufio now. I\'d totally raid his cat house every morning. I mean...Rufio\'s cat house will be my starbucks from now on, and I don\'t even go to starbucks. He can boil my coffee any time.
..anyway. Yesss.. Eliza is getting cuter and cuter by the minute. One thing I love about her is that she\'s not shy with expression, which I see a lot of girl characters shy away from because it might end up making them retarded~not-cute-looking enough. But Eliza is nothing like them. She is one genuine Jay Sherman. I honestly can\'t wait to battle her. YOU ROCK! This BB is...the best I\'ve seen so far.
Your panel layout is AMAZING! Especially in...agh. There\'s way too many pages that I loved when it came to layouts, and it\'s awesome to see one of my favorite page being used as your comic\'s thumbnails. Your story is also great, and I\'m fucking hot for Rufio now. I\'d totally raid his cat house every morning. I mean...Rufio\'s cat house will be my starbucks from now on, and I don\'t even go to starbucks. He can boil my coffee any time.
..anyway. Yesss.. Eliza is getting cuter and cuter by the minute. One thing I love about her is that she\'s not shy with expression, which I see a lot of girl characters shy away from because it might end up making them retarded~not-cute-looking enough. But Eliza is nothing like them. She is one genuine Jay Sherman. I honestly can\'t wait to battle her. YOU ROCK! This BB is...the best I\'ve seen so far.
# 4
Posted:
Aug 15 2007, 10:28 PM
This is one of the few honestly emotionally-involving pieces that exist on Void.
And dude. Artwise, you\'ve been holding out on us. In our battle, I wanna see you kick my ass and take at LEAST 90% of the votes, because you\'re TOTALLY capable.
And dude. Artwise, you\'ve been holding out on us. In our battle, I wanna see you kick my ass and take at LEAST 90% of the votes, because you\'re TOTALLY capable.
# 3
Posted:
Aug 15 2007, 09:57 PM
this was amazin\' thank you
# 2
Posted:
Aug 15 2007, 09:47 PM
AUTHOR\'S NOTES: This comic is based right off the events that happened during the Satin vs Eliza fight. ( Kura\'s winning side of course ) If you haven\'t seen it yet, definetly read that match first. Also, I\'d like to briefly thank everyone that has supported me in getting this thing done, you know who you are. <3 Thank you Toast and Wei for dealing with the heavy load of pages ( gmail took forever sending and I don\'t know why.)
I hope you enjoy this surreal piece of work, or not whichever. Either way I look forward to your critiques and i will continue to bust ass in improving my skills. Thank you!
I hope you enjoy this surreal piece of work, or not whichever. Either way I look forward to your critiques and i will continue to bust ass in improving my skills. Thank you!
# 1
Posted:
Aug 15 2007, 09:45 PM
I\'ll give it 5 Fonzies.
Beyond Battle
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1 week
Ended:
Aug 23rd, 2007
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42
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Thank you everyone for your compliments and criticism! I would never expect this one to be so well recieved by you guys. Thank you so much!
And for some of you out there....
RoflQu: Nothing says true love like the Fonz. I can\'t stress that enough...
....AAYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Yuki/Spinzoa: Hahaha if I didn\'t know any better, I\'d say you\'re out to kidnap all my characters. Seriousleh. As for Eliza, I have to admit....drawing a serious character and making them serious 100% is not easy for me to do. No matter how hard I try, I always end up giving them alot of exaggerated emotions to make them less of a stale personality. Thank you for enjoying that much about her, and I\'ll keep breathing more life into her as I progress.
Even though I can wait forever and a day, part of me can\'t wait to have our match either.
Perca: YAAAAY! NOW I DON\'T HAVE TO SNEAK THROUGH YOUR BACKYA--I mean, that\'s mighty kind of you ma\'am. I\'ll bring a Spiral jello mold as a token of my gratitude. <3
Haven + Linus: I agree with you guys totally on linework. I just noticed in the later pages * after pg 4 * that my lines were getting way too thin and breaking apart. I think my main problem is in my line variety, and that will be remedied hopefully in my current fight. I am going to give full color a shot one more time, but if that falls through the cracks I\'ll revert back to doing black and white and possibly monochromatics. ( maybe steal Linus\'s awesome cross hatching skills...AHEM! )