First off I really really really love how you used your colors here. It gives it a real cool dark vibe. I also love your lines, they really complement the atmosphere!
My only complaint is that it would have been nice to have at least a establishing shot, maybe at the end of the 1st page, to get an idea of where these characters are and how is their place different from Void city; it was a bit distracting jumping from page 1 to 2 and having to backtrack to realize Klippo was now in a different place away from the ATM in page 1! Anyway, great job with everything else! Can't wait to see what sort of trouble these two get into at the Original Character Tournament!
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Jan 10 2017, 09:15 AM
Beyond Battle
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Honestly I'm super duper into your use of deep shadows and minimal colors! You showed just enough background to give a hint of setting without pouring time into rendering scenery. And that's the sorta draftsmanship I truly appreciate.
Bout to go read your OCT entry and hot-damn, I hope this quality carries through.