while both used a similar idea, the difference ( and i'm not talking about the artistic...) is that MrPr evidently was short on time, while Pyrras managed a bit more.

MrPr, i see that you could have used more time, and this time your ink was... thicker? I think? the opposition Speed vs Brute strenght suffers from it because Owl seems heavy with it. Use lighter lines to depict smaller and fastest opponent !

Pyrras: Liked the twist in the end. Owl destroy his enemies from the inside too, huh? it gives me so much ideas !

I found it intresting that both comics used a similar body guard plot. Mr Pr this was a good comic but I felt that it lacked some of the things I look forward to reading in your comics, like character interactions and satisfying dialogue, you seemed to always find the best reason for characters to have conflict but because these two hardly talked to one another I felt it was missing something I normally enjoy in your comics, also some of the times it felt like we didnt get to see how fast grey owl was but rather were simply told how fast he is.

Pyras this comic was a fun read it was really cool to see Gray Owl as nearly a myth and both characters carried a unique amount of energy with them Virtua felt heavy and Gray Owl felt fast, I also really enjoyed how imposing you were able to make him feel in the comic.

Oh man! Read yer' entry! I found that ending hilarious! Yay burgers! (and what's funny it's that I was also originally going to make the Virtua-leaving-Owl-to-client-part too before I lazed around)

Comic's done. But it's still not all that good 030; Really should had used the time to make it look better. But I got really exhausted in the end.

Work has been mighty oppressive this past month, talking 50+ hour weeks and miscellaneous life shit getting in the way; I don't think I'll be able to pull off the level I try to bring with this amount of time given.. just a heads up for then the deadline passes and I'm sorry MrPr I couldn't go 100% on this

I can feel the excitement in my bones

I wish Pyras luck!