@rittzler
I like how you really got the characters down pat (both of you did) and your tones really carried weight. not really sure what was going on with the double vision, I guess he broke the reapers blade? really enjoyed the read and Sorokii's attitude.
@Camel
Love this, the colours really pop and the $15 was a great gag, and the action was fun to read. I felt like some of the attacks were very showy and I wasn't sure what exactly was being done. regardless the flow wasn't interrupted and I enjoyed the read.
Original Character Tournament, Round 1 / Sorokii vs. THE GRAVEDIGGERS
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Jan 10 2017, 07:03 PM
# 3
Posted:
Jan 10 2017, 03:17 PM
THIS WAS A TOUGH ONE AHHHHHHH
Rittz:
POOR MIDGET SKELETON. Your round was solid. I think you did a good job balancing out your blacks and whites! It took me a doubletake to realize what happened on pages 5-6 with the scythe, and I personally feel like the fight felt pretty.. run of the mill and ended a bit quickly. Sorokii's strikes me as a character who's gonna shine through his combat!
Camel:
Fucking. Hilarious. You gave all the characters TONS of personality and the ending had my dying. The fight felt pretty well paced for who they were up against. I'd like to see you get a bit more adventurous with your panel layouts, and your lineart is a bit sketchy so there's a lot of stuff that looks pretty rough. Thunk!
Rittz:
POOR MIDGET SKELETON. Your round was solid. I think you did a good job balancing out your blacks and whites! It took me a doubletake to realize what happened on pages 5-6 with the scythe, and I personally feel like the fight felt pretty.. run of the mill and ended a bit quickly. Sorokii's strikes me as a character who's gonna shine through his combat!
Camel:
Fucking. Hilarious. You gave all the characters TONS of personality and the ending had my dying. The fight felt pretty well paced for who they were up against. I'd like to see you get a bit more adventurous with your panel layouts, and your lineart is a bit sketchy so there's a lot of stuff that looks pretty rough. Thunk!
# 2
Posted:
Jan 10 2017, 11:19 AM
rittzler: that class and that shakespearian finisher were pure savage.
Camel: my man, that cliché of the heroic monologue was simply genious.
Camel: my man, that cliché of the heroic monologue was simply genious.
# 1
Posted:
Jan 10 2017, 10:10 AM
And that's round 1! I've also made a short little intro story about the gravediggers which explains what they're doing in Void city, check it out.
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jan 16th, 2017
Votes Cast:
29
Page Views:
1560
Winner:
Camel
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Approval Committee
Rittz:
The Horatio joke was solid.
Camel:
The THUNK gets me, every time.