Invyn & Jasper vs. Gargonne and AEGIS

Invyn & Jasper vs. Gargonne and AEGIS

Invyn & Jasper vs. Gargonne and AEGIS

by Reecer6

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# 7   Posted: Jan 12 2017, 09:49 AM
wow nice job both of you!
Reecer: not sure what the joke is with the hat. Is the hat important? Is this a running gag? I dunno. I like the play on the demon I didn't expect that. Tiny dick demon, he is right to feel insulted. Shame they couldn't get him a body. Anatomy is pretty okay at times, but then around pg 3 everything looks kinda squeezed in to fit and its a little messy. I think you're backgrounds look decent but you could push to make them a little more detailed in the sense of light, darkness, and color. I hope that helps you develop your art a bit further, nothing like a good crit right? ;3 Like I said I love your comic, you do great work! Push it into the next gear, let's see what else you got!

kent:Love the ending <3 great pacing etc.

# 6   Posted: Jan 9 2017, 12:09 PM
Good Job guys!!!

# 5   Posted: Jan 8 2017, 01:03 PM
To quickly put up a short post-mortem... MAN, I've got to learn how to get pacing down in a comic. I feel like I really didn't establish what was happening well enough in my comic, and everything feels super fast and rushed. At least I've learned the importance of establishing good, detailed backgrounds.

This is supposed to be going on at the same time as the winter collab (didn't plan for the dates to even match up, but that's cool!) but I JUST REALIZED TODAY I never actually put any thought to the weather and just made it a clear sunny day, so that probably doesn't get across well at all!

(Page 1 has really bad backgrounds because I put them on the same layer as the foreground and I kind of never fixed it, which severely limited how much I could spruce it up. Whoops!)

# 4   Posted: Dec 18 2016, 11:44 AM

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# 3   Posted: Dec 18 2016, 10:25 AM
Yay for more Kent comics

# 2   Posted: Dec 18 2016, 07:25 AM

# 1   Posted: Dec 17 2016, 11:39 PM
I'll try my hardest to improve on the pitfalls of my last comic! Mostly that it was too comfortable and not all that interesting!

This premise is perfect for making something even *more* comfortable and technical though, so this'll probably be a challenge.

Comic Details -

Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Jan 15th, 2017
Votes Cast: 20
Page Views: 917
Winner: Mister Kent

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