I like this police officer! I kind of want her to be a member of the VCPD ^_^
I think the art in this one suffers because of the lack of color. The strict black and white kind of flattens the imagery, and I think that even adding some flat gray tones to separate foreground, midground and background would have brought more depth to the environments. The ending feels like a cliffhanger, so I'm assuming there's going to be a fourth installment? If not and this is supposed to be the conclusion, then I think the ending would have been more satisfying if the police officer got to have some sort of brief confrontation with the little girl at the end to bring some closure to the officer's investigation.
I've really liked these little demon-forest stories ^_^ they make me want to create a haunted forest for Void City XD