Intro Story / Colonel Mac Samson

Intro Story / Colonel Mac Samson

Intro Story — Colonel Mac Samson

by HFR


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Heathen
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# 11   Posted: Oct 11 2016, 07:08 PM
I lol'd.

Please post the full comic as a BB, we need that.

zee
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# 10   Posted: Oct 9 2016, 09:59 PM
Seems like this guy is going to be a lot of fun.  
Can't wait to see more!

HFR
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# 9   Posted: Oct 9 2016, 09:15 AM
petarvee: Overall, I dug it! Your anatomy's not bad, your pacing's on-point, and youre unafraid to draw cityscapes, which is a plus. But personally, I wish there was just a little bit more in this intro.

In Mac's character description, he's got a goofy enough backstory that I would've loved to see referenced more. Plus, I dig that he's a character that essentially runs on Saint's Row logic. I would've loved at least see him drive home and see what his place is like, or at least his wider world.

Also, what're you using to make your pages? I get the feeling its microns or fine-liners that you scanned in and colored. And as a little side-note, watch out for image compression. If you're exporting from Photoshop, you can just export it losslessly as a jpg or png.
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Thanks for the review! Actually I'm terrified of drawing cityscapes, (and backgrounds in general,) but it's necessary to try, so yeah. Thanks for the advice about the Photoshop export, you were spot-on about the microns and scanning. I'll try it out next time for sure~

To be honest, there's like 15 or so more pages of his backstory already drawn, but the 4-page limit made it difficult to put out something self-contained. 5-pages, sure, but not 4. I can probably post it in a beyond battle or something once I figure out how this whole thing works.

Thanks again, love your work.

petarvee
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# 8   Posted: Oct 9 2016, 03:20 AM
Overall, I dug it! Your anatomy's not bad, your pacing's on-point, and youre unafraid to draw cityscapes, which is a plus. But personally, I wish there was just a little bit more in this intro.

In Mac's character description, he's got a goofy enough backstory that I would've loved to see referenced more. Plus, I dig that he's a character that essentially runs on Saint's Row logic. I would've loved at least see him drive home and see what his place is like, or at least his wider world.

Also, what're you using to make your pages? I get the feeling its microns or fine-liners that you scanned in and colored. And as a little side-note, watch out for image compression. If you're exporting from Photoshop, you can just export it losslessly as a jpg or png.

Jackster
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# 7   Posted: Oct 5 2016, 03:39 AM
Now that's what I call a 'hit and run'!

Loving this character so far, man. Can't wait to see more of him.

JCee
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# 6   Posted: Oct 3 2016, 09:49 PM
Oooh, how did I miss this one? I'm really keen to see where you take this scumbaggish but still intriguing character.

HFR
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# 5   Posted: Oct 3 2016, 09:03 PM
@Nana: Haha Thanks! I am glad you're interested in following the escapades of this "gentleman."

@MrPr: You're totally right. Should've made him the focal point of panel 2 or something. Thank you for the critique!

@Radji: Glad you found this diggable.

@Kozi: Thanks for the warm welcome! I've actually been following some of your stuff. I really enjoyed the intro comic for Remy, but the website didn't let me vote on it because I was new~

Kozispoon
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# 4   Posted: Oct 3 2016, 12:48 PM
Whatta cheapskate. Pay your dues, son! XD
This comic definitely sets the stage for what a buttmunch this guy is. Been a while since void's seen a veritable heel bust through some windows and make a splash. If your first battle follows the events of this intro, I'll be curious to see who he bumps into first. Welcome to void, man!

Radji
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# 3   Posted: Oct 3 2016, 12:44 PM
HOLY HELL dat ONE MOTHERFUCKA
I DIG

MrPr1993
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# 2   Posted: Oct 3 2016, 09:15 AM
Dang dat's one interesting fellow! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next in his battles!

Only critique I got is that in the third panel, he shoulda' appear before jumping off the window. It would give some action.

      Edited Oct 3 2016,  09:17 AM by MrPr1993

Nana-Banana
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# 1   Posted: Oct 2 2016, 10:44 PM
I am already extremely invested in your character! I can't wait to see more of this gentlman and his wacky adventures on void!

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