KARMALARMA- This was such a fun romp. A comic battle that takes place at a carnival is totally my jam. It looks like you didn't get a chance to color all your pages, but if the first page is your 'complete' work, I'm thinking that might be a good thing. I'm no color expert, but you got this nice cool overall lavender feel to everything, which I dig, but it still has that primary color starkness to it that makes for a jarring feel. Your inks are strong, so I think your inks only pages are definitely preferable. Still though, of all the things colored, I think Judgement Call in her transparent form is SO NEAT. I just really dig that effect.
Seeing Click and J.C interact as our resident bunny plays Superman made me smile. I gotta say my fav panel has to be holding the bumper cars apart as the family of ducks waddles past because- WTF ducks in a bumper car alley?? XD It's great to see J.C isn't just tagging along like a lump either. They have a variety of expressions up to the point they get fed up.
To see this end with Judgement Call questioning everything leaves me curious as to where you're gonna take this. So glad you intro-ed this character, and am having fun following their adventure. Keep it up!


TECHNICOLOR-SCREAM: It seems with each battle you turn in, the quality of your pages get lower and lower. You have such a great handle of gesture and movement in your work, which shines even now, but its tough to critique this when its- as admitted- done in a day. :/

Both these comics were delectably adorable and fun to read though I am a bit of a stickler for setting and I feel both were lacking on consistent environment. Though I feel that Limbo would not have much to it, it was a bit jarring to just be in the empty blank of the void though I did see you tried to put in a horizon line I just wish we got to see a little more imagination on the setting. Both of you had a humorous tone and both stories were well written I wish you both had a little more time but these still came out amazing and both characters were fun to see interact.

Nah, not at all, This whole dang thing was inked yesterday. I've been in a bit of an art slump so this comic kinda kicked my butt, haha

Karma, your inks are nice and crisp and your colours, where you had them, were vibrant and lovely. Your story is nice, the Pacing works. Though there's a couple times where I would have wanted you to take just a teensy bit more time or less words, nothing too detracting though. If there's anything I'd like you to consider, it would be your line width. There's places where the backgrounds are thicker than the characters in front of them and that's suboptimal to your aesthetic, which is otherwise nicely rounded. It's an enjoyable entry and oh my god I love your death doll, he's gorgeous and fun.

Technicolor, I mean, am I surprising you if I say this looks rushed? I mean, the energy and movement and story are all rather good, heck, even your sketchy lines are pretty strong as far as sketchy lines go, and nicely readable, but yeah, despite all that it's rushed that first comes ahead, which is a shame. Nice work anyway, it's a cute fun read.

sweet entry you two.

@karma i honestly feel like the uncoloured pages worked better. i probably just didnt like the palette you were working with. wasnt sure where to look at and imagined that on all pages would have quiet hurt the overall outcome a bit. story wise your entry was sweet and clever. i liked the little rollercoaster in their brains.

@technicolour your entry really made me smile. it was sweet as hell even if simple. i just wish you could have brought better lines and some more backgrounds that were lacking here and there. also i feel like you could play a little more with your panel borders.

awwww yeaah

oh my god this will be so great!!

Can't wait for this.