@Choleric & @Rhimwill: Thank you very much for the critiques! I will use them to correct the issues with this comic since my intention is publishing it in a local amateur zine in a few months, so that advice was really useful for me! Thanks to everyone who read and sorry again for the lack of translation XD And thanks again to Mister Kent for this battle!

@kent: this comic is dumb. 10/10

@ishtar: even though its written in another language i could still follow the plot just by the action, bravo. I'm not a fan of the gutterless panels however, especially using black for the gutters, as whatever else thats black in the panel that touches them gets subsumed into the gutter- which sort of causes the comic panels to accidentally bleed into one another. If you plan on doing black gutters, your layouts are going to have to be designed next time to keep this in mind.

Ishtar: Despite not understanding the language, I still got the gist of what was going on throughout your comic because of your good visual storytelling! I like the gritty, black-heavy style your using. I think it would benefit from using a stricter perspective grid to draw the backgrounds, so that you can get straighter lines and tighter angles on your buildings and such.

Mister Kent: Your comic is so cute and retro! I really liked it. I think that the payoff at the end is a little underwhelming, though. It needs a bigger explosion and the evil cat-lady being like "Noooo! Curse you Astrocat and Dimwit Dog!!" or something like that to make the ending really satisfying.

These comics are both really fun and also really different from each other! XD It's really hard to vote on this one!

ATTENTION! I have managed to make a translation in text form. You can find it here!  http://sta.sh/0u2f2rxv42w
Again sorry for the inconvenience!

@Shen - Thank you very much for the kind words! I am sorry for the text being in spanish, I ran outta time to translate it! Don't feel bad for not being able to read it tho, man, if I myself was given an untranslated manga I too would be in trouble!

@PyrasTerran - yess one more of ussss for the army- I mean what

@MISTER KENT - Your comic was so adorable! And I really loved Leona Frisk's design! Also, great work with the perspective! Very creative! It's been a honor going against ya!

Kent, I thought this was super charming! Im kinda diggin the adventures of Astro Cat lol!
Ishtar, this is GORGEOUS to look at, you are like a MASTER of black and white holy shit, the intense shadows and detail are insane, but WOW i sure dont speak spanish ^^; i have literally no idea how to vote now though. is it creative and entertaining? I dont know, but its pretty! sorry for being such white people ^^;

Hehe. *knows spanish*

Aaand submited! Sorry it is in spanish, guys :c I will post a translation when the comic is up!

...you are makingme feel THINGS

Aw yeah artist battle! Give it your best shot, you two!