2016 Heavyweight Tournament: Round 1 / Luna vs. Johnny Sweet

2016 Heavyweight Tournament: Round 1 / Luna vs. Johnny Sweet

2016 Heavyweight Tournament: Round 1 — Luna vs. Johnny Sweet

by Charlie

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Charlie
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# 23   Posted: May 29 2016, 11:35 PM
Johnny isn't in it at Sabu's request. When she signed up for the tourney she only asked for Brute and Ted, hence why there is only Brute and Ted.

Energy
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# 22   Posted: May 29 2016, 11:33 PM
Charlie:  So many pretty colors.  Where's Johnny, btw?

Charlie
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# 21   Posted: May 28 2016, 07:52 PM
To be fair nothing really happens in this comic haha, it was mostly just stream of conscious which is why nothing really leads up to anything haha. I had no real time to think about it cause I did it in 9 hours. I am still glad you guys like it! I hope I have more time on the next fight.

mortooncian
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# 20   Posted: May 28 2016, 02:00 PM
Endshark: IM STILL AMAZED YOU DID THIS IN SUCH LITTLE TIME? Like Taylor said, to me the main issue is that there's no focus on Brute or Ted, but, 11 hours???? And the coloring/lineart is still so solid. Daaamn

Sabu: UNLIMITED HIVE WORKS

otakutaylor
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# 19   Posted: May 28 2016, 01:21 PM
Charlie: pretty much my only crit would be that Brute and ted never really... did a thing?  Which works fine for your story, but not really in a battle where you're trying to showcase your opponent too. Otherwise, it's freaking brilliant and amazing, and holy cow. in that order.

Sabu: You butt.

PONBIKI
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# 18   Posted: May 28 2016, 11:00 AM
Charlie.  I really like the colors and the zippatone dots.( Ill take some notes). Overall I like the style and the cartoon feel to it. good luck.

Sabu. I wanted to see some dino action.

Jetty Jay
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# 17   Posted: May 28 2016, 03:06 AM
CHARLIE: A really great effort alongside your freelance work! I think some of your panels could use wider gutters just to give the art room to breathe (eg. page five). Use of colour throughout is really cool and about the only thing I'd say is that there were all these subtle *looks* from Brute & Ted that didn't seem to lead to anything. This is a fun story though and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Luna being reunited with her brother (also pink <3)

SABU: Kick ur butt u better do well in Hiveworks.

JCee
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# 16   Posted: May 27 2016, 09:40 PM
Charlie: I'm beyond impressed you managed to draw a comic in a day! I WISH I could get that much done as quickly as you.

Sabu: Dammit, what a shame. I was hoping to fight you in this tourney, but stuff happens and real life does come first.

Charlie
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# 15   Posted: May 25 2016, 08:19 AM
Not sure how much actually got captured from the stream because it did disconnect a few times so there may only be chunks of it but my picarto channel is Triggershark!

Anyway thanks man, I wouldn't really call this one a victim of procrastination so much as I actually legit didn't have the time for it due to freelance taking priority for me haha. It's just I guess I got good at doing last minute things over the years that it happened to come in handy here. I am hoping next round I have more time to deliver but I also won't turn down work as it's more important to me to keep that ball rolling ! I dig the pink too! I actually did the comic in grayscale but just used colour balance adjustment layers to colour it so I could tweak it easily. The pink really appealed to me as well when I got it.

Thanks everyone I will try and do better next round if I can!

Heathen
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# 14   Posted: May 25 2016, 06:11 AM
Sorry you didn't quite make it, Sab.  Charlie, oh master of procrastination, you inspire me for reasons I'm not sure are good.  I really dig the pink in this comic, it works.  If that stream got recorded, PM me the link, I'd really like to watch it and follow your channel.

Radji
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# 13   Posted: May 24 2016, 11:47 PM
*Radji prostern himself at the feet of the almighty Charlie*

PyrasTerran
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# 12   Posted: May 24 2016, 09:39 PM
Charlie: For 9 hours it's great, like Shen said you're god tier and the day you realize that we are all $%&#'d. Since you had so little time to work on it it's hard to critique since you'r eprobably aware of most of what it's lacking. It's cool to see Luna's story progressing forward, and how you used Brute and Ted worked for this issue, I'd say just keep doing what you're doing (with more time) and you're set for Round 2

Keep on rocking!

Shen
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# 11   Posted: May 24 2016, 08:30 PM
oh my god charlie i cant believe you drew this in a DAY and its still SO PRETTY you are God-teir

Charlie
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# 10   Posted: May 24 2016, 08:27 PM
Haha I wish I drew them better, but it is what it is for the time I had for it!! Good luck with all your projects Sab :>! I know you've been busy and I totally understand how that one is @v@!

One day we will have to fight for real or something or other OR WHATEVER.

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# 9   Posted: May 24 2016, 08:24 PM
just fyi
i did upload pages but i guess bc they didnt include Luna, its a default.

WHAT IM SAYING IS im not that big a weenie

Charlie, u drew brute and Ted beautifully haha

Charlie
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# 8   Posted: May 23 2016, 09:21 PM
I ended up doing a comic. It's not the greatest thing I have ever done and is stupidly short but I did this in 9 hours (I can back that claim up too haha, I streamed the entire damn thing...). Anyway I was originally gonna default but I found myself with some time today so I decided to put it to good use.

So yeah, better than defaulting I guess.

Sabulive
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# 7   Posted: May 23 2016, 06:25 PM
Im unfortunately in the same boat as Charlie. I submitted the pages that are half done or fully inked but they dont have speechbubbles ;-;

Charlie
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# 6   Posted: May 21 2016, 12:24 PM
Just as a heads up I probably won't have anything for this :(! I will see what I can toss together but I have been busy. I thinking signing up for these tournaments are just not feasible for me anymore , freelance work has been good to me so far (far better than I thought) on top of my day job :(! I will still try and see what I can put together though on Monday but I do apologize ahead of time.

Radji
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# 5   Posted: May 9 2016, 11:24 PM
SPACE-DINOSAAAAAAURE

Jetty Jay
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# 4   Posted: May 9 2016, 04:42 PM
DINOS IN SPACE

Also I want to kick Sabu's ass personally. Really everyone's ass. But mostly my neighbour's.

      Edited May 9 2016,  04:43 PM by Jetty Jay

Shen
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# 3   Posted: May 9 2016, 04:38 PM
DINOSAURS ON THE MOON

Sabulive
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# 2   Posted: May 9 2016, 04:33 PM
HAHA DRAW ME ALL MY DINOS CHARLIE

Julz
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# 1   Posted: May 9 2016, 04:23 PM
This isn't fair!! I don't know who to root for DX

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Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: May 29th, 2016
Votes Cast: 22
Page Views: 1006
Winner: Charlie
 

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