Intro Story / Cambriel
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
May 1 2016, 02:14 AM
CONGRADS ON THE NEW CHARACTER JULZ!
# 5
Posted:
May 1 2016, 01:26 AM
can't resist...
CAM USED LIGHT ATTACK
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE !
CAM USED LIGHT ATTACK
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE !
# 4
Posted:
Apr 30 2016, 05:39 PM
Nah, nothing wrong with crotch shots. I just thought it was weird/something different for an agendered character.
# 3
Posted:
Apr 30 2016, 05:27 PM
Are my pages too big?? Ahh panic mode!! Sorry for all the crotch. Theres nothin there so i thought itd be fine haha
# 2
Posted:
Apr 30 2016, 05:13 PM
Welcome to VOID.
I like your angelf character. (And would definetely like to battle my demon character against them) But that's a lot of crotch-shots for someone who hasn't a defined gender. Not sure if that is going to be a running gag or not.
Also, for future pages, I hope they can be smaller, because it's hard to read images this big.
[EDIT]
I also just realized this is you Julz and, in fact, not a new VOID member.
Why am I adding any critique to you Julz.
Bad elge, bad.
I like your angelf character. (And would definetely like to battle my demon character against them) But that's a lot of crotch-shots for someone who hasn't a defined gender. Not sure if that is going to be a running gag or not.
Also, for future pages, I hope they can be smaller, because it's hard to read images this big.
[EDIT]
I also just realized this is you Julz and, in fact, not a new VOID member.
Why am I adding any critique to you Julz.
Bad elge, bad.
# 1
Posted:
Apr 30 2016, 12:12 PM
so an underdog with a sentient weapon and light-oriented attacks. something teel me that this guy is a good guy ^^
seriously tho, good fantasy character, with a lot of improvement room! can can do many things with him/her in the future
seriously tho, good fantasy character, with a lot of improvement room! can can do many things with him/her in the future
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