Intro Story / Cambriel

Intro Story / Cambriel

Intro Story — Cambriel

by Julz


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Thresher
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# 7   Posted: May 1 2016, 04:30 AM
ANGELS VS LOVECRAFT?
I AM HERE FOR THIS

daletronzero
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# 6   Posted: May 1 2016, 02:14 AM
CONGRADS ON THE NEW CHARACTER JULZ!

Radji
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# 5   Posted: May 1 2016, 01:26 AM
can't resist...
CAM USED LIGHT ATTACK
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE !

Dechado
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# 4   Posted: Apr 30 2016, 05:39 PM
Nah, nothing wrong with crotch shots. I just thought it was weird/something different for an agendered character.

Julz
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# 3   Posted: Apr 30 2016, 05:27 PM
Are my pages too big?? Ahh panic mode!! Sorry for all the crotch. Theres nothin there so i thought itd be fine haha

Dechado
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# 2   Posted: Apr 30 2016, 05:13 PM
Welcome to VOID.
I like your angelf character. (And would definetely like to battle my demon character against them) But that's a lot of crotch-shots for someone who hasn't a defined gender. Not sure if that is going to be a running gag or not.

Also, for future pages, I hope they can be smaller, because it's hard to read images this big.

[EDIT]
I also just realized this is you Julz and, in fact, not a new VOID member.

Why am I adding any critique to you Julz.
Bad elge, bad.

      Edited Apr 30 2016,  05:23 PM by Dechado

Radji
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# 1   Posted: Apr 30 2016, 12:12 PM
so an underdog with a sentient weapon and light-oriented attacks. something teel me that this guy is a good guy ^^
seriously tho, good fantasy character, with a lot of improvement room! can can do many things with him/her in the future

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