Dawn and Rise / Coral

Dawn and Rise / Coral

Dawn and Rise — Coral


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full range34
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# 16   Posted: Mar 16 2006, 04:27 PM
have u ever considered challenging mize or crazy samuri? it would test ur skills to the max


full range34
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# 15   Posted: Mar 16 2006, 04:26 PM
this is some serous good crap i give it 2 thumbs  up

kure ji ori
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# 14   Posted: Mar 11 2006, 12:04 PM
to be fair its not all that hard to comprehend. its just showing you how she got the nanos

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
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# 13   Posted: Mar 7 2006, 10:36 PM
You knowm upon reading it again a third time... i have no idea when this could be. Its after Battle Royale.... but way in the future..... but like its HER past, becuase shes FROM the future...... so its like them nanos (which i thought left her after killing her and were in dan now?) are telling her what happened to her finally that makes her all crazy?

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# 12   Posted: Mar 5 2006, 10:19 PM
Well, I figured that it took place in the future, but it\'s still a flashback. I assumed that it took place after Coral\'s death at the end of Battle Royale, which is what I\'m pretty sure he was going for. If not, my mistake, and I\'m sure Collosus will correct me.

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# 11   Posted: Mar 5 2006, 09:36 PM
Also.... it doesnt really matter if colussus doesnt win Batte Royale (but he probably will). He can still go on that during the battle, Coral was majorly messed up, and near death, and it still makes sense. As long as he doesn\'t go back and completely change the past, its ok.

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# 10   Posted: Mar 5 2006, 09:34 PM
If you read the story, and then Coral\'s bio, and then all her comics.... everything that happens in this comic leads me to believe this is in the FUTURE, BEFORE she came back to Void. This, I do believe, is trying to explain why she is the way she is, where she got some of her powers, and what part of the dark entity inside of her is (the shadow we see behind her in her last 3 fights before battle Royale).

Of Course I could be wrong.... but everything, fromt he story, to the VERy futuristic weaponry,to the much larger population of odd robot beings, leads me to believe this is her time, before she came to our time.

This really makes me think that some people really dont ACTUALLY read the stores that are presented, and makes me think some people need to go back and read Battle Royale.

I still wish your comics had more of a set up, Colussus. More set up, and more narration explaining just what is going on, becuase it seems a lot of the time, we are trying to piece together a puzzle, but we only have a few of the middle pieces. No border at all. No real explainations for why things are happening, and it still seems like you know a whole lot about Coral, and you write as if we do to, when in reality, we don\'t really.

other than that, the art and character designs, especially the robots, were pretty cool. The bots especially. I liked that one at the end with the limbs that weren\'t physically attatched.

hazy
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# 9   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 10:02 PM
\"oh my god! shes still alive!\"

i lol\'d

ESG
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# 8   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 08:24 PM
Damn this is Epic! It makes me want to read more.

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# 7   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 08:20 PM
I like the intro to the Epsilon. That\'s pretty original. Robotic judges of the sick and dying. Well, that\'s what I got from it. And the design for it is friggin\' sweet, especially how you intentionally made the Lambda look like an airborne model based off Shredd. I really would like to see more as to what reasons Estrella wanted you alive, cuz I really hope it has something to do with \"dark coral\". This is fucking promising-good shit.

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# 6   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 06:03 PM
nicely done..cant wait for more

kure ji ori
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# 5   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 05:37 PM
man your stuff is always a joy to read

(Pi)
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# 4   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 04:35 PM
Incredible.

I assume this is taking place after Battle Royale? What happens if you don\'t win?

Colussus
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# 3   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 03:55 PM
lol can I vote on my own stuff? XD

Nex in a Box
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# 2   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 02:26 PM
and santa brought guns...


wonderful. superbly wonderful

Monday
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# 1   Posted: Mar 4 2006, 01:10 PM
Dear god, christmas came early this year.

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Mar 10th, 2006
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