layeyez: I also feel a little lost with as to what actually happens in the comic...

flutter: love a good breaking of the fourth wall. High five!

KOZI:
 there's no point for me to point this out now. but I didn't thoroughly enjoy submitting what i had, i mean on our first rest stop while driving across the country up to my new place, i try to do most of this on my galaxy Note 3 phone and knew from there that it was over lol pretty much the last day of the deadline, my roommate and I made it to the his grandparents farm that and after that, I actually had like a few hours left to finish what I doodled on my phone, and then of course ran a bit off the edge last minute threw on the draft dialogue i had. even uh the last hour i'd questioned to maybe just default and not embarrass myself. i sort of wished I did  after seeing the mistake when the comic was put up... oh the remorse.  But yeah, excuses excuses,  better luck next time ay.

thanks again for the crits.  i need to implement the more so next time around. <3

LAYEYEZ- I had to check your previous battles just to make sure, but I feel this time around we got a dip in quality. Which, honestly, no one can be too hard on you on, I mean you only get three days to bust out some comic badassery, so I think that can be forgive, but as you've mentioned some of the proofreading this time around was overlooked.
Another read through of your side raises the question as to who's talking here. Flower Power has a sister so is she talking? Then again, 3 Page Max just lost his memory crashing through a window, so does he think he's a robot now and that flower power is his sister? So many questions, I just don't think your comic answered or clarified for me.

FLUTTERBYES- You took your opponents themes and ran with it like a mandman. This is great! Way to poke fun and really be silly with this concept. Who knew breaking the fourth wall could be so fun? I especially dug the tie in with Ai as the catalyst for all this craziness. Poor little Flower Power unfortunately got a little sidelined during this whole romp, however. Left me wanting to have her a little more incorporated into the story than just a clerk who hands off a purchase.

Thanks flutter, and Shark, if wasnt for the move/road trip id spend more time on it =_= manage to get this much done on the last day... im aware of the rushed dialoge and the the typos that wont go unoticed. but regardless hope you all enjoy my comic on the road.  Haha Flutter i love how much you made my characters in thier full dumbass glory (/u  \
I wouldnt mind maxx going out that.

Oh my god I love both of these so much haha. Also Layeyes you aren't alone anymore, looks like other people are shipping our characters hahaha-- look what you started!!

But yeah awesome work you two this is my favourite ;0;

L...Layeyez... That's beautiful! I love it!

OH NO HOW BITTERSWEET MY BARELY WON VICTORY IS. It's getting a little too real for little ol' newcomer me! How will I meet this challenge?

Lookit this new kid, murderin' left and right, a heavyweight in the making. I'm supah excited to see how this goes!

oh my gosh oh no!! GOOD LUCK! I cant wait to see how this turns out!!

ladder match