Light Speed Death Tournament, Round 1 / Dyna and the Gal vs. The Demon Gu

Light Speed Death Tournament, Round 1 — Dyna and the Gal vs. The Demon Gu

by Minteh

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PyrasTerran
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1512 comments
# 15   Posted: Jan 22 2016, 10:02 PM
Minteh: lol this fucking kid... you're one of those artists who are so good at the lit, you just need more practice with the art, I think you know where you need improvement cause your pages are always improving so just keep doing what you're doing cause you're doing it right

Thresher: don't die on us ;_;

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 14   Posted: Jan 22 2016, 08:09 PM
MINTEH- I'll have you know I took one look at that first panel when you shared it in discord chat and immediately said, "Damn I gotta step up my game." Some real nice detail going on these panels. REAL nice. Its only a taste, but I already like where this little gal is going. Can't wait to see your round 2

Jetty Jay
Artist
151 comments
# 13   Posted: Jan 22 2016, 01:48 PM
MINT: From your bio I wouldn't have picked that Tammy was meant to be like an old-god sort of thing so I'm just interested if this matchup changed your character direction a little? If so I think that's really cool haha. The inks and tones on this are SO nice but yeah as you've mentioned in chat you need to find a new way of doing bubbles and some of the lettering where it's gotten pixelated (for me, I draw them at the same time/in the same way as everything else I do but I can get if that's not working for you especially under time constraint - hope the advice you got from peeps in chat helps). This was a great, funny story and I love the pay off with the joke at the end. Nice work.

THRESH: Sabu's plans when it comes to taking your eviscerating you usually involve my house please go underground until she forgets cos I need my security deposit back and I'm not sure the bloodstains will help me there.

Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 12   Posted: Jan 22 2016, 07:14 AM
Mint: Goooood you've improved so much!!

Thresher: sob. Hope you get better!

Iced Tea
Artist
59 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 21 2016, 09:41 PM
Ah... so it was almost death before default for realsies. s: I'm glad you're doing ok Thresh, too bad bout the lack of comic but your health's much more important. Get better soon.

Minteh this was an entertaining comic and I really like the way you inciorporated Gu into Tammy's world.

Field Marshal Lionel Forsythe W. Underwood XIII, GBE
Artist
141 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 21 2016, 08:14 PM
Mint, that was an engaging read. The clean crisp lineart and the characterizations of the characters is pure entertainment. I'm eagerly awaiting what you can do on the next rounds. Keep at it!

Thresher: Life is just a bowl of cherries.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 21 2016, 02:56 PM
Fucking hell Mints hahaa. I love how your art got a lot cleaner man, I really do like this a lot. Work on those text bubbles though! The story was really funny :D

Brentony
Artist
51 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 21 2016, 02:31 PM
Can I just say how much I love Old God Toddler

otakutaylor
Artist
183 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 21 2016, 11:30 AM
Light Speed Critique: Minteh, excellent detail and form both in characters and in backgrounds. Do watch the word bubles though, the bubbles and outlines of tails and large letters ended up pixelated looking. Thresh, You aren't immortal enough, work on that. Get well soon!

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 21 2016, 08:08 AM
Minteh - That last panel is priceless. I actually think this is some of your better art as well, you're really coming along nicely. Good stuff bro.

Greg - Man, that's a shame, I was really looking forward to some Gu. Oh well, shit happens, get better so I can enjoy your kidneys properly.

Minteh
Global Moderator
275 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 20 2016, 06:27 PM
Hey Thresh, don't worry about it! Hoping for your speedy recovery!

My stuff's uploaded!

Thresher
Artist
166 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 20 2016, 04:33 PM
Sorry minteh I've been ill the past week and unable to eat. Not had the energy to do much of anything beyond sleep. Still a bit under, losing kidneys won't help.
Sorry I couldn't do more

Minteh
Global Moderator
275 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 17 2016, 11:14 AM
GL Thresher, I'm not kind enough to spare your kidneys :P

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 17 2016, 09:05 AM
Greg if you lose I'll buy those kidneys from Sabulive and eat them

Sabulive
Artist
133 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 17 2016, 02:28 AM
Good luck you two!

Thresh, if you lose Ill stab u and sell ur kidneys on the black market

Mintley, if you lose its ok, you did ur best and im proud of you <3

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Speed Death Tournament Match
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Ended: Jan 23rd, 2016
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