Overall this was exceptionally well drawn, but I\'d have to warn against the lack of pure black in your shading - which makes the images look somewhat flat, but you made good use of your mid range tones which was nice.

bambi...

Thanks, everyone.  I did actually mean for this to be an exercise for myself in action poses and angles, so maybe it didn\'t turn out quite as interesting as it could\'ve been.  I actually got this done a month and a half back, so there\'s already a number of things I don\'t like about it.  Still, a learning experience, which is good.

I also noticed by now that I did the toning so throughly that I might as well have done full color... no wonder it took so long!  Oh well.  Maybe when I get the time again.

Good stuff, GR. Your hands still throw me for a look whenever there\'s a decent shot of them. They always looks noodly or shriveled, especially Draco, who\'s supposed to be a big guy, yes?

Very nice action scenes and perspective, and your poses are looking cool. Mize\'s last pose in the third panel of page 3 looks really weird in the legs area, though.

Keep it up, can\'t wait for Armageddon.

You guys are giving me great pieces to work with on arma.

Liked the sword fighting, looks pretty good.  Not the most exciting story ever but it was told well and got the point across.  Good stuff Ronin.