Intro Story / Mildred M
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Dec 2 2015, 10:41 AM
I am entirely on board with kick ass old ladies and i cannot wait to see her battle
# 3
Posted:
Nov 29 2015, 01:55 AM
i love her. there is nothing to complain. its minimalistic and its supreme
i see what la fred means but i like it that way. its a great cliffhanger that immediatly catched me on the last moment. spread it would have less impact imo.
i see what la fred means but i like it that way. its a great cliffhanger that immediatly catched me on the last moment. spread it would have less impact imo.
# 2
Posted:
Nov 28 2015, 04:42 PM
I want to fight her!
# 1
Posted:
Nov 28 2015, 08:49 AM
I rather like the art style you got, the heavy black and composition are nice. You cram a lot of info in that last panel though, which could have been stretched across your pages instead of dumping it all together. This is more a question of rhythm than writing, 'I can't remember the last time I killed someone for me' is quite a good line, just it loses a bit of it's effect like this. Looks like a charming character, I can dig it.
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awesome concept, can't wait