TDK: Your solid black ink on the first 4 pages are looking pretty snazzy, bro! I also wanna say how I'm super impressed on how you pull off the military part of your comics so nicely, it really puts you in the mood of the scene and action! My only suggestion for the future is, since I notice some shaky, disconnected, or hairlines in your inking, to keep practicing confident and single strokes for your backgrounds and characters. Backgrounds are definitely improving in this comic, but yeah like I said, try that out. Little details like more cracks, scratch marks, little pebbles on the ground, etc could help when it comes to locations like where they were fighting.
Excited to see more from you, good work overall!
Ultra 88 vs. Elle
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# 5
Posted:
Oct 1 2015, 08:30 PM
# 4
Posted:
Sep 29 2015, 12:28 AM
Oh dammit I just realized that I missed the last page while uploading:
Herr http://imgur.com/PgwaycN
or
http://orig14.deviantart.net/a1d7/f/2015/272/f/b/page_9_by_tdkgunghoul-d9bbiws.jpg
Herr http://imgur.com/PgwaycN
or
http://orig14.deviantart.net/a1d7/f/2015/272/f/b/page_9_by_tdkgunghoul-d9bbiws.jpg
# 3
Posted:
Sep 28 2015, 08:42 AM
damn, lettering is a game of life or death
# 2
Posted:
Sep 8 2015, 07:07 PM
yep lettering as we speak catch you later
# 1
Posted:
Sep 7 2015, 08:19 PM
OH!! nice, this is perfect!! arent you in another fight too, graphic? haha way to jump right in! good luck!
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