Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 2 / Doctor Princess vs. Ashley Longhorn

Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 2 / Doctor Princess vs. Ashley Longhorn

Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 2 — Doctor Princess vs. Ashley Longhorn

by Julz

52.3%
746 points
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by Qyzex

47.7%
681 points
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PyrasTerran
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1422 comments
# 21   Posted: Jun 30 2015, 10:54 PM
Julz: What a cool comic, great job! It's a shame you couldn't finish the colors but keep it up!

Qyzex: Sadly this one isn't as strong as the last one, there's a few too many headshots of our bespeckled host and I think the humor's a little weaker than the last comic. Art wise though I'm satisfied.

Keep up the good work you two!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
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1055 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 30 2015, 07:48 PM
Julienya: Really big surprise this round, fantastic work on your part. I really enjoyed what you did here and thought it was funny.  Your coloring is looking a lot better, as are your expressions and actions. I think this was a real step-up from last round, not only in content but in humor, good to see you working within your deadlines that are available and doing what you can with your time.

From my perspective, your biggest weakness is that your lines and characters become a little flimsy sometimes the farther you back up the camera. Your line-widths are also a little too variegated and often become inconsistent as a result. That could be a result of time, so maybe if more time was available, it'd be better. All in all, this was a great show and I'm curious to see what your next round brings. Great job.


Qyzex: I am in love with Victor and it would have been a-okay with me if this was just a test run to try out the character in some form, because he is a really entertaining and great character. You've really made something interesting out of him and I would definitely read a web-comic from him.

As for Ashley, really amusing as usual. We only got to see so much of him before, but I feel like I got a better handle on him as a character and I thought you did really well in conveying him and showcasing him off this comic. Your colors are really solid looking as usual and your expressions have been really improving lately. I loved the posing when you displayed it and I think there was just so much here that really felt good.

As you told me before, I think you kind of hit the nail on the head with this comic's weaknesses. If you had had some more full-sized shots to show us the relation of the characters as they showed up, it would make a big difference, unfortunately the talking heads shots didn't work too well for you in this case. It was weaker than your first round in this case.

Still, overall a great little comic, funny and awesome to read. Great job.

Bobo
Web Dev
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893 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 30 2015, 06:23 PM
JULZ, YOUR COMIC KILLED ME. It sucks that you weren't able to color the whole thing, and it looks like you had to rush some of your linework, but your comedy more than made up for it. Loved it. 10/10 would do agian.

Qyz, your comic had a very polished, finished look to it that I appreciated. You used those simple animations very effectively, as well; that may have been my favorite part. I think my only complaint is that there could have been some more detailed backgrounds. I know that's a lot to ask in a week, but at least keep it in mind for future battles, as you have time available to complete your comic a little more.

Awesome job from both of you, and I'm looking forward to next round from either of you!

Gregly
Artist
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125 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 30 2015, 03:28 PM
julz- your comic moves really well, every scene gets the right amount of page space it needs.

qyz- nice work getting this so clean and colored in just a week! it seemed to me though that this comic focused too much on the host guy and not the competing characters. i like doctor princess's creepy facial expressions and the unique face shape you gave her!

Cracking Skulls
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344 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 30 2015, 11:51 AM
Juli: I loved this stupid sense of humor you got, because I was laughing way too much reading through it. It sucks that your quality started to drop nearing the end, but it didn't effect your delivery imo. I kinda noticed how page 8 had this empty space happening after the last panel. I think you could have used it, but otherwise, nice job overall!

Qyz: I dig what you had here, this was a pretty nice set up from start to finish, and those sparkle effects are a nice touch. Those flats are begging to get some shading on them tho, so I hope you could do more of that in future comics. I would say I was wondering where all that blood on Dr. Princess came from. I could have been clearer if you had maybe some bodies laying around? it had to have come from somewhere. Aside from those, really nice comic

Hobbittastic
Artist
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164 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 28 2015, 11:21 PM
Julz- This comic was super funny and you did a really great job on it.

Qyzex- I'm a big fan of your cross hatching. Ashley is so handsome *-* and your color palette was great, too.

Shen
Global Moderator
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1279 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 28 2015, 04:34 PM
oh my god you two these were so goddam hilarious I dont even know how to vote between them XD

Julz- man everything you do just cracks me the fuck up! this is probably one of the dumbest and best things i have ever read holy shit XD I wish you could have finished the end but it maintains pretty good quality throughout. RIP Josuu, best character on Void.

Qyz- I love your colour palette! Your Dr Princess is pretty funny lol "I got distracted." It almost feels strange to see her whole face but I like the face you gave her. Ashley is rising in the ranks of my favorite characters, hes such a genuine guy!

Great round, you two!

Bittermause
Artist
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242 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 28 2015, 09:42 AM
Julz: Some very nice assecution pulled in this round! Shame you couldn't color the rest but the story and humor really pulled through. My only minor critique is the end when Ashley's butt was having a paradox-freak out. The heavy inks looked like he was having an explosive poo, so it took me a few seconds to register what was up.
Shame that Josuu's bizarre adventure had to end this way.

Qyzex: While this entry was more chill than your last round, I still found this comic equally charming. I loved the calm neurotic portrayal of Dr. Princess, and the dialogue exchanges were goofy and fun.

This was a pretty close toss up. You both handed out some really funny entries that I enjoyed very much!

Dechado
Artist
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228 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 28 2015, 08:44 AM
Julz: Now that is the type of content I signed up to read when I joined VOID. A shame you could not color all of them, but this is a pretty good story.
I liked the color pallete. So calm. ^^

Qyz: Colorful pages! I am really enjoying this contest idea you're going on with Ash.
 And uh. Umm. You made Doctor Princess really pretty. cough. :///I



      Edited Jun 28 2015,  08:45 AM by Dechado

Coatl
Artist
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318 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 24 2015, 06:23 PM
Real talk, I liked your comic jlz, it was real funny, real creative. Wish you had more time to color nd I hope you take the extra time to fix inconsistancies here and there!

qyz, yours was hilarious too, i really like the idea you used for the setting, and i wish there was just more read cause this woulda made an interesting extra 15 pages.

Coatl
Artist
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318 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 24 2015, 06:21 PM
I dont appreciate these gay jokes, they trigger me.

they're too funny,

they're too real.

Charlie
Artist
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726 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 24 2015, 03:55 PM
I am probably not gonna critique much on any of the fights but I'm gonna offer my thoughts on the comics anyway :).

Julz - your comic had one of the most refreshing premises on this site in a while for me I think. It's stupid but the fun kind, and I love that.

Qyz - This comic was simple but also really funny to me too. The fact that Ashley won by just undoing what Dr. Princess put on Ghoul's face was great.

For both of you great art as well :)

Kozispoon
Approval Committee
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1046 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 24 2015, 10:38 AM
JULZ- May your comics always deal with ass spelunking. I haven't laughed like that since I don't know what. Your Dr. Princess seems like such a serious character, that its refreshing to see someone so spooky playing the straight guy (badum tish!) in an otherwise humorous comedy. I'm sorry you ran out of time to color your battle fully, but what was complete was pretty lovely! Ashely's purple cavernous walls and the roaming meta unicorn just had me in stitches! XD You'd think events playing in and out of the colon would be kinda nasty, but I think you keep the detail minimal enough to just let the funny through. I have to say, if I had to pick a standout page it had to be page 4 and Ashely's reaction face with Dr. Princess finally stepping on into his butthole. Wow, this whole bit of commentary is pretty anus heavy...

QYZ- As always, solid pages, and lovely colors! I gotta admit, your story isn't as strong this time around and the fact you may not of known what to do with Dr. Princess kinda shows. I think there was also a mention of the fact you had trouble with page 1 which I also agree with. Each panel is a 3/4 view of our host looking in the same direction. There's no interesting angles of the studio, or him speaking to the audience. Much of that is echoed in the following pages as its mainly just shots of the hosts head/shoulders. I dunno, for as lovely as it all looks, the comic falls a bit flat for me.





Julz
Artist
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371 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 23 2015, 11:19 PM
I think mine's okay too. I think its in the righ order but i stayed up sooo late coloring  waaaah

Qyzex
Artist
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670 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 22 2015, 12:15 PM
I'm all fucking uploadeeeed. I think the page order is correct, it was giving me issues though. Page 2 kept finding it's way to the end of the comic. Think it's good now, tho

Julz
Artist
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371 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 22 2015, 10:18 AM
...Huumanity is not ready for this.

Fearn
Artist
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349 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 18 2015, 11:21 AM
Oooh and when u have an idea little girls grow beards....

Cant wait for both of these :D

Julz
Artist
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371 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 18 2015, 06:45 AM
oooooh boy lmao. I actually have a pretty fun idea.. Let's make this a good match Colin ;3

Shen
Global Moderator
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1279 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 16 2015, 12:00 PM
I have very high expectations for this, don't let me down! =D

Kozispoon
Approval Committee
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1046 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 16 2015, 10:17 AM
I expect a whole lotta gay jokes and some catheters. Chop chop

Qyzex
Artist
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670 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 16 2015, 07:47 AM
My name is Colin Abel. You killed my friend, prepare to die.

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Resurrection Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jun 30th, 2015
Votes Cast: 33
Page Views: 870
Winner: Julz
 

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