Under Your Spell / Kars vs. Andre

Under Your Spell — Kars vs. Andre

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E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 11   Posted: May 5 2015, 03:15 AM
tdkgunghoul: Nice job. I was a big fan of the story, it was simple and produced a real amusing "punchline" in the form of the scar. I think my only disappointment is that Kars and Andre never got to meet up and power up their J.O. crystals or whatever it is that Kars does with dudes in his spare time. (No judgments.) I was a real fan of the night show format to present everything and the woman who got to sent to jail for being the girlfriend of a criminal. She seemed to have the most personality in this story, really absorbed the page she was on, lot of good movement and emotion from her.

Your anatomy is getting much stronger lately, you're doing fantastic in progressing on that front. That posing in the beginning with Andre with that sentai kick is real top-notch, very fluid with a lot of motion. I think your weak-link still in doing characters is with your faces, they're much more angular in composition and seem sort of lacking in that regards, especially when your posing and anatomy has improved a lot.

Glad we had the battle! Always a pleasure.

Kozispoon & Dino Nebitt: Thank you.

Heathen
Artist
462 comments
# 10   Posted: May 2 2015, 06:18 AM
Spoon pretty much said it.  Great efforts from both of you for a 1-weeker, but ROFLQU brought the bigger guns here.  Excellent character acting and expressions.  Great pacing, no wasted space, a glorious splash page, and a clear love for Kars.  Thoroughly enjoyed this.  I laughed out loud at the Cauldron's 80%  face.

TDK, I have to ask, how the heck did the prison phone go from a touch tone to a rotary?  Nice body language with Morgana there, though, and the corpse with the phone on its head tickled me, heheh.


Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 9   Posted: May 1 2015, 01:55 PM
TDK- More Kars comics, hooray! Glad to see this ol' skullhead unable to stay away from the limelight of the battling ring. Regardless of whatver scars are doled out here, I seriously wanna battle you!

I'm a little thrown by the titlecard and how it pertains to your tale. Even upon second read I'm all "Whats with the guy on the horse?"

Another pretty straightforward comic, though I really wish Kars had made more of an appearance apart from a cameo. It seems your stable of NPC and side characters carry this tale with Andre's scar as payoff at the end, but I wonder how much of this is really a scar. He had a dapper beard and women find him irresistible? Seems more like every mans dream to me. I dunno, maybe its just me, but I honestly think Kars is an interesting enough character that you don't really need the bevvy of side characters to showcase him. He's pretty awesome in his own right.

As for your comic, it looked in a bit bare overall. The characters were drawn well enough, but the world and environments they were residing in didn't seem fully realized. Not surei f that's just how you do or the product of  a 1 week deadline. Them's pretty tight odds either way!

ROFL- Hooray! More roflQu' comics! Glad to see you in the swing of this, man- and showcasing Andre no less! I know I've said it before in the hangouts when you were working on this, but I really do think Andre played a great straight man to your version of Kars and his zany shenanigans. The 'Trust me, I'm a wizard!' line had me chuckling, and that cauldron breakdown and its expressions were top notch. Really tight and concise comic with plenty of gags to enjoy. I did notice the dip in quality on that last page, but its obvious you were strapped for time and your hands were about to fall off.

Hell, its an impressive number and display of quality that you completed what you did in only one week. Seriously, thats a bravo meant for the two of you. Way to rock it and roll it guys!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 30 2015, 11:25 PM
Having some error getting the last page up. Everything else seems to be there? Worst case scenario, you can still understand it, I guess. Gonna try to fiddle if I can.

EDIT: Alright, no problems. Thanks for the battle, kind of dip in quality, turned out I had a little more work to do that I expected this week, but it was fun!

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 28 2015, 03:06 PM
LET'S DO THIS >=D

Orion
Artist
224 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 23 2015, 07:27 PM
Just what I need right now. :D

PyrasTerran
Artist
1513 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 23 2015, 02:07 PM
yeah booiii

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 23 2015, 02:04 PM
DUUUUDE

Wubble
Artist
91 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 23 2015, 05:38 AM
oh my.

Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 23 2015, 05:23 AM
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhh!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 23 2015, 05:17 AM
oh hey comic

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Scar Match
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Ended: May 7th, 2015
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