Gargonne and AEGIS vs. Roger Ribbit

Gargonne and AEGIS vs. Roger Ribbit

Gargonne and AEGIS vs. Roger Ribbit

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Mister Kent
Artist
946 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 14 2015, 08:36 PM
Good points Kuro--I still need to learn to zoom out!

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 14 2015, 09:21 AM
I liked the over all plot to run a theme through the thumbs. overall, it was pretty ok. I think in trying to get that slant happening it gives you strangely shaped panels & in some places I don't know if you're making the most of of the composition you've got to work with. If anything I think It might mean just zooming out a little bit. It just feels like things are getting cropped a little funny to me. Like last panel of page 2. You've got this tall panel with a point on the top right edge. You're close but I think I would've drawn the character further down, get the arms in there in full. That way, less back but also more space between him & that other word balloon, you know. That way his own doesn't have to sit so tight up in his arm pit. this is knitpicky stuff but it's the kind of thing that was sticking out at me.

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 13 2015, 11:00 AM
Definitely appreciate the scar creativity

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
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# 12   Posted: Apr 12 2015, 05:56 AM
this was a funny comic Kent-dude! My major complaint is that it's on the short side for 2 weeks, but at least it's completed;

Ahmed wai ;_; I love roger ribbit comics and thou hast robbed me ser

hope to see that BB redemption comic soon!

Mister Kent
Artist
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# 11   Posted: Apr 10 2015, 08:22 PM
Thanks all!

Yes, Kozi, it was definitely intentional - I was continuing an experiment I started with my King of Void comic (http://entervoid.com/index.php?action=comic;id=5173). It only really works if one looks at all the thumbnails side by side, but this was less noticeable because it was only three pages. :D

Shen
Global Moderator
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# 10   Posted: Apr 10 2015, 01:48 PM
I'm disappointed, Ahmed, but I cant help but laugh, you didn't turn in on a scar match and now Roger has the best tattoo on all of Void XD

Heathen
Artist
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# 9   Posted: Apr 10 2015, 12:45 PM
Hahaha!  Yes!  

Ahmed, I'm not mad, I'm just disappointed.  Very disappointed, actually, I was really looking forward to seeing another Roger comic from ya.

Enjoy the tattoo, Rog!

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1077 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 10 2015, 11:57 AM
MISTER KENT- Gargonne is one hot momma. Errybody out for da booty! I honestly was dubious when I only saw three pages, but this was a funny, cute and interesting little story! the sort of stuff I'd find in a cartoon comic sort of deal which I dig. The tattoo on the chest was a hilarious payoff. XD
Also I dunno if this was intentional, but all your pages are rocking the same slanted middle panels now that I'm looking at them side by side. Was that intentional? Not complaining too much about it because I think it kind of looks uniform and neat, but yanno- panel variation and all that. You know the drill XD So glad to be seeing this duo in comics though. Definitely want more!

AHMED- Glad you're cheered up cuz the rest of us are miserable :<

Ahmed
Artist
29 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 10 2015, 11:41 AM
Ahahaha XD I was bummed but this has cheered me up immensely.

Mister Kent
Artist
946 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 10 2015, 07:55 AM
We still love you *3*

Ahmed
Artist
29 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 9 2015, 11:27 PM
Omg, I'm gonna have to be a bummer and BB my comic in a few days. I'm am not worthy of your time or awesome character. If anybody needs me I'll be in my room sobbing and eating cold pizza..

Mister Kent
Artist
946 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 9 2015, 07:46 PM
Roger + Gargonne = LUV 4EVA

Minteh
Artist
252 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 26 2015, 06:11 PM
Yes! I didn't know I needed this until right now.

Shen
Global Moderator
1298 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 26 2015, 11:32 AM
good luck! cant wait to read!

Mister Kent
Artist
946 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 26 2015, 10:19 AM
Yeeeeaaauuhhh! Good luck Ahmed! Can't wait to draw Roger ~ :)

Comic Details -

 
Type: Scar Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Apr 16th, 2015
Votes Cast: 12
Page Views: 765
Winner: Mister Kent
 

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