@Dan- Thanks man for the kind words, and yeah I'm working on a quick little X-Mas one-shot and paying more attention to making the faces a bit more distinctive. I'm hoping that it's not just a problem my style suffers from. Keep an eye out!

@cultmasterflex- Yeah Bunny-Girl is the bee's knees B)

I liked this comic. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes. I do agree that at times all of the main characters looked the same, possibly adding color or some more noticeable facial variations would help with that for the close-up scenes where their hats aren't clearly visible. Other than that, I liked the style a lot, and got a kick out of the humor too. I'll be watching for part 2!

I really enjoyed this comic. Bunny girl was definitely cool though.

@pocky - Thank you Hm yeah I think you're right; I usually do a better job with facial variation, I think I got too caught up in trying to make them hecka cute and it just sorta mushed them into the same facial-structure. Will definitely pay more attention with these gals in the future

I was worried about the same thing, but thought that since I'd already submitted stuff as the AGCS I was stuck with it, so I will most definitely do that (maybe I'll update the Design Sheet to make them a bit more prominent as well? Hrmmm...).

EDIT: Well, I can't change the name but instead changed the design sheet and profile text to do a better job clarifying!

Great intro story! I'm a sucker for the bunny girl :3

I feel like I'm staring at the same girl the entire time in the comic, even though I know there's more than one. I think you should give them more variety. And by variety I don't mean changing up the style of hair, but more like how their faces move, their eye shape, face shape, etc. Regarding their age, I didn't realize they were in their twenties until I looked up the character profiles.

In the future battles, I really wonder if people will fit every single one of your chariacters, or if it's a main two-people crew. As a suggestion, I would change the name of your character 'animalgirl criminal squad' to just 'Ruth and Yvonne' to clarify it. I'm sure with time everyone will know the squad's name, but the name of your character sort of implies all of them being needed in the comic.

Ah! I don't know!
I guess that depends on how long is long enough?! D:

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