Fuck Time Travel: Armageddon Epilogue / Gray, Miller, and Xia

Fuck Time Travel: Armageddon Epilogue / Gray, Miller, and Xia

Fuck Time Travel: Armageddon Epilogue — Gray, Miller, and Xia


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Kozispoon
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1046 comments
# 11   Posted: Nov 8 2014, 01:13 PM
I've looked over this comic more than once, and I can't for the life of me point out who did what exactly. It's kinda of awesome! It shows you guys definitely knew how to meld your talents together to make a really harmonious comic. Not to mention tickle your readers with some nice aftermath (or beforemath? fuck time travel)

The colors in this were lovely, not to mention it was groovy to learn more about Millers nefarious(?) background. Its also nice to see Gray making friends, although her motivations definitely sends a chill down ones spine. Do NOT get on that lady's bad side!

I'm bummed that the role of Pip Poodle was played by a pug in this  comic. What happened to Xia's adorably trusty sidekick? :(

Puzzlething
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457 comments
# 10   Posted: Nov 4 2014, 04:58 PM
        You guys do a really great job combining your skills! I actually had difficulty telling who was doing what, just because it all melded together so well.

Bobo
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# 9   Posted: Oct 29 2014, 04:37 PM
I may have been generous with my votes because of personal biases, but I enjoyed the comic. I agree that it felt a little pointless, but to me it was more of a counterpoint to the craziness of Armageddon itself, which made this little "back to normal, going nowhere, slice-of-life" comic feel more like a sigh of relief (other than Gray, dammit girl!) than a bore. I had fun seeing how the three of you meshed styles—it was pretty flawless, in my opinion. You played to your strengths and harmonized really well.

And yeah, my favorite part was Gray disappearing with those foreboding last words. Oh Shen, you little rascal.

Shen
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1276 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 29 2014, 11:46 AM
^^; thanks for the crits, guys. I guess I can see what you mean by it being pointless. I guess it felt like more was happening in it while we were working on it. But can we all agree that the panel of Gray disappearing backwards looks fucking boss because thats like my new favorite Gray anything.
In any case, uh.... here it is anyhow?

Pennydox
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235 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 29 2014, 11:13 AM
I don't know the intention of this comic, but I feel that three people did not have to make this one thing. It feels like someone really wanted to say 'fuck time travel' and get two other people to make the comic with them. Other than that, I don't know how this comic will link to anything else, whether it is a unneeded conclusion to Armageddon, or some sort of very vague prequel to Miller or Gray's story. Either way, in my opinion, I think any one of you could have easily done it on your own in some other comic.
Shen's animated pencils and Skull's light handed inking is a nice combo though.

PyrasTerran
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1413 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 29 2014, 08:17 AM
Thanks for the thoughts so far. If anyone is curious and/or wants to critique any specific elements, here are our credits:

Writing:
Page 1: Pyras
Pages 2-6: Shen
Pages 7-9: Skulls

Pencils
Page 1: Pyras
Pages 2-9: Shen

Lines by Skulls

Colors by Pyras and Skulls (editing)

Lettering/recap by Skulls

If I messed up anything here Skulls or Shen can correct me~

      Edited Oct 29 2014,  08:21 AM by PyrasTerran

Julz
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371 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 28 2014, 06:18 PM
I didn't know this was coming I love this hurray for new comradaries!!

Majikura
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466 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 28 2014, 04:33 PM
Ermmm... I have to be honest,  this comic seemed kinda pointless.

It boils down to it just being a load of exposition that doesn't reveal or change any of the circumstances of the characters involved, save for the foreshadowing of Grey's future exploits.  With Miller being in every page yet saying very little, I feel like he's just a silent game protagonist just clicking on random NPC's to hear what they have to say without putting any input in.  Analogies aside: I would have liked to see more interaction, instead of everyone just telling Miller stuff.

Chimaeric
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247 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 27 2014, 09:59 PM
excited for this you guys!!

Monday
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932 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 27 2014, 08:27 PM
Ohohohohohhoho

Shen
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1276 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 27 2014, 04:43 PM
I kept fighting before this was finished and got my continuity out of alignment but needless to say this takes place BEFORE vHowling and vBlack.
-edit to say i just read the title of this omg I cannot stop laughing XD

      Edited Oct 27 2014,  04:56 PM by Shen

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