extremely difficult to look at, tdk. it also looks like you've never digitally applied color to an image before. based on what I can see, it looks like you colored everything in by hand. I'd definitely recommend using a lasso or magic wand tool to select areas you want, and then filling in with the paint bucket on another layer. you'll get cleaner results and it'll be much faster in the long run! all that said, I wish you had spent the time working on your inks and bgs instead. and please don't ever mix that xmas green and red like that again.

thresher, it's very awkward when you have a figure cut off near the ankles like you do on the first page, I feel like there should be feet there. the inks are extremely rough and unfinished looking.  not too much else to say, since it's clear not much got done.

tdk uh wow SATURATED haha ^^; I had to read this like three times to follow it because i kept getting distracted by the colours. i would uh, maybe tone those down a bit next time?
also thanks for the cameo haha! was he looking at a naughty image of Charlotte Gray? ....and then his name is Ian GREY that makes it twice funny. *looks again* ....wait a second i think I just figured out what is happening in pages 4-5 there, you scamp
anyhow in the future if you want people to be able to follow the story I would suggest maybe a different colouring method ^^; I don't even know how to rate it as it is.
Thresher This feels like a start of something but then it doesn't go anywhere, I like that it continues from your BB but at this pace it will be hard to get a full story. I like the linework though, and the effects and environments look pretty good- maybe could use some heavier blacks in some places, I mean they are in a cave.

Dammit TDK.  My eyes bleed just by looking at the thumbs.

Finished uploading. 16 pages all, I hope you brought eye protection.

Not going to upload much, I have overextended myself this time.

Because I am a huge butt, this is going to look very unfinished artwise once I upload it.

YES FINALLY

I hope its gonna be like this...

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fUis9yny_lI

this is a great matchup!!

THROUGH THE HOURGLASS I SAW YOU

FINALLY