you had a really good buildup to your cliffhanger, but then killed all the tension with the silly ray drawings on that last page.  Now i dont know if Ray was taking the whole situation seriously or not.  Your ending would have had more impact and meaning to it had you omitted those three panels.

BOBO - Yes, I will continue doing comic things, because you like my butt  xD

HATS - I KNOW RIGHT? Teacups are super cool and manly.

POCKY- Thank you for feedback! I love, loooove doing color and I think the biggest challenge with this one, was not doing color because I kept catching myself trying to color stuff  xD

I hope I never, ever turn in nothing. And yehh, my anatomy still sucks, arms and arm length above all (My legs also really suck, man, me and my lengths of things, boo), but that's why I'm here, drawing comics, getting better  

Ehhh, I think I'm just really comfortable dealing with Ray, partially because I understand his personality really well- theres so much to work with in terms of personality and the whole bigoted monster hunter sort, and partially because I'm really comfortable with Kent (I am wildly insecure, so irrationally afraid that people will yell at me if I mis-represent their character). I think you'll be happy to know, that I'm planning a match with someone in the near future, that is new and awesome and lovely, and somebody I haven't worked with before, that will not have Ray anywhere  ^.^

I do think Ray will feature a lot with my beyond battles for Nate, just because he's so integral to the story I have in my head- This is just the first bit, there will be continuation to a conclusion of this story (This story actually picks up from Kent's half of the battle I had with him, some time ago)

And yehhhh, I originally wanted it to be longer, but halfway through the week I got hit with some rather intense emotional fuckery, so there was a while where I just, I didn't think I'd even finish it. I'm glad I did though.

Of all the void comics I've ever done, I've only had one color one, and I didn't even draw the thing, and my hand felt like it was going to break because it took two months to do it. And so I congratulate anyone who can manage color work in a time frame in Void. No color is totally fine. No work turned it is not fine for me though.

You have this obsession with Ray, that's cool and all but just know there's plenty of fish in the sea of Void. Hopefully not every single comic you do is going to cameo Ray in the future. I have a feeling you were getting lazy towards the last few pages, because the first few look much tighter. Story transition is really nice, it was interesting from beginning to end. People are gonna keep repeating 'work on your anatomy', but I'll focus on one thing I notice the most about your anatomy-you need to practice understanding the length of the arms to real people. Sometimes the arms get really short, some poses seem really stiff, and sometimes the arm movements just aren't quite convincing. Concentrate less on the head, more on everything else.

I love how you had Raygun drinking from a china teacup

Yup, that last panel just about sums it up. Damn you Rob with your hangovers! I mean hangcliffers. I mean butts.

Keep drawing because I like it.

This level of fanboyism is both adorable and charming. CARRY ON.

+1

I should warn you, that despite the title, it's not funny. It's maybe a little depressing and badass.
But mostly it will be fabulous line art.
o_o

I am glad my demands are met so quickly

I'm in for the title alone XD

Expect a combination of epic detail and glorious line art. And nothing in color.
I know, I know,
no color
from ME
how BIZARRE.
This one is an idea I had, that I was going to challenge Mister Kent, but since Ray is now half unicorn, the story doesn't really work in Ray's canon at all, so it seemed weird to challenge him. But I still wanted to do the story, because I thought it was cool.