Paavo vs. M-Zero-Oh

Paavo vs. M-Zero-Oh

Paavo vs. M-Zero-Oh

by Dechado

Icon for Paavo34.9%
159 points
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Icon for M-Zero-Oh 65.1%
297 points
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Dechado
Artist
249 comments
# 12   Posted: Jul 14 2014, 07:35 PM
Sorry about this you all. I still lack organization with my time when it comes to comics VS exams.
I thought I could handle it. It's fun when reality strikes.

You're being too nice to me, Tofu, and I don't deserve it. Thank you.

I'll try to finish this comic as a Beyond Battle after I am done with Lesdai's current comic.

TOFU - I really enjoyed your comic, your inking is bold and it fits your style gorgeously. I loved Paavo's transformation sequence and the action throughout the comic. Very dynamic and as always I love your silent comics.
I don't know if it was mentioned already but Page 5 seems extremely big/won't load. Maybe it is just me. Ahaha.

Best of wishes for your M-Zero comic release. Looking forward to it!

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 14 2014, 01:35 PM
Thank you for the feedback, everyone! I am intending to go back and hit this with tones and shading--this is going to be an insert in the print issue of M-Zero-Oh volume #1, which will be made available first at Power Morphicon!

Thanks again to Elgesugha for letting me play with your character!

Mister Kent
Artist
948 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 13 2014, 11:19 PM
Elge - Not much to judge on, but the first page would have really looked more complete with some more background details. Make the next comic count!

Tofu - Some of your layouts were both ambitious and confusing, page 3 and 4 beiing examples where things sort of run together too much and there's no background to get a good sense of what the action is. Seeing a silent comic was admirable, because it didn't seem like you just ran out of time for dialogue--it felt like it was meant to be. I suggest shading next time, and also backgrounds. It'd push your art to another level :D Nice work here, and I'm looking forward to more from M-Zero-oh!

Gregly
Artist
134 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 12 2014, 12:55 PM
elge- bwaa bwaa. would've liked to see what you had been planning.

tofu- i like how gestural your inks are and how they pull the reader across the page. this comic is full of nice action-y poses and lines that are easy to read... i was worried because it seemed like your character was too overpowered but the reveal that that was the joke at the end made me smile! good job.

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1111 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 10 2014, 11:59 AM
ELGE- Don't really know what to say. Two pages? Don't really know whats going on, or if there was more to it. All around puzzled.

TOFUBEAST- Right of the bat, I wish there was some defining shading, or grey scale to your inks. Maybe even go heaviero n the blacks as there's so much white space and I had a time telling characters apart from speed lines, backgrounds and elements. I did enjoy the action however, and even the playful twist at the end where you find out its a videogame. Nice charming romp between pals. :)

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 7 2014, 12:29 PM
@Rob: Thank you for your feedback! I was worried that it was kind of hard to follow--I'm planning on going back and hitting the panels with more tones/shading so stuff stands out better.

Runback and counterpick are words that you'll hear in competitive gaming, usually in the fighting game community.

Runback/Salty Runback: basically a rematch. The loser's gonna "run it back" and try and win in the rematch.

Counterpick: a tactic in which a player will pick a character that does well against another character after their opponent has selected said character. Some call it "scrub tactics", some call it a legitimate strategy.

My entire entry is saturated with fighting game references, I apologize.

RobThing
Artist
84 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 7 2014, 09:38 AM
Elge- Seems like this is a tag to another story? And I have no idea how the thing on the second page relates to the story. Though it does look really cool, with the black. Art-wise, it seems sort of empty, with just the lines. And for some reason, it really bothered me that none of the panels show the guy's face. I thought it was a setup or something for an epic face reveal, but nope.

Tofu- It was pretty to look at, but I found it sort of difficult to follow. I like how you set it up as playing a video game. though I don't understand what they're saying on the last page (runback? counterpick? what?), but I think I get the jist of it.

Generally, sort of underwhelming. But good job, both of you getting them out on time.

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 6 2014, 09:52 PM
Uploaded. I haven't uploaded comics in a while, I hope this actually went through. D :
Elge, please make sure to take care of yourself and don't worry too much!

YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY
THE THIRD STRIKE'S THE ONE THAT COUNTS

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
400 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 25 2014, 04:11 AM
M-ZERO-OH BACK IN THE GAAAAME

Shen
Artist
1320 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 23 2014, 01:39 AM
Yeah!! Get it!!

Dechado
Artist
249 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 22 2014, 10:05 PM
Hey look. A rematch.

Kind of.

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 22 2014, 10:04 PM
A NEW CHALLENGER HAS ENTERED THE RING

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