ha oh man this character looks like alot of fun! I Can't wait to see what shenanigans you put her in.
The intro itself is pretty good too, hardly any dialogue but still telling the story visually good on ya.
Though I would like another comic explaining why theirs a crocodile hiding within a sand trap in the middle of no where waiting for someone to mistake it for a mirage... it's so stupid it's brilliant! I love comics
Intro Story / Buck & Bones
Critiques & Comments
# 11
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Jun 10 2014, 10:06 PM
# 10
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Jun 8 2014, 03:20 AM
HAHA, I don't know what's going on here but I LOVE the style! And those boobs... are just perfect... I would like to give you critique or advices, but I'm too amazed by the playful style to say something.... Seriously can't wait to see more from you!
# 9
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Jun 6 2014, 07:38 AM
Hah thanks pockey!
I did consider going all out with fonts amd sound effects for this, but decided against it cause stylisticly shes so brutish i almost wanted the whole comic to have a rough feel (thats why my borders look shite too hahaaah) but i think ill use an actual font if other characters are talking. Ya know, to get that mad contrast haha. Not sure what ill do about sound effects, i find they look dorky anyway so i might just keep scribbling them anywau cause they look stupid pffft hahaha
So keen to get started on my first battle!!! Haw yeh
I did consider going all out with fonts amd sound effects for this, but decided against it cause stylisticly shes so brutish i almost wanted the whole comic to have a rough feel (thats why my borders look shite too hahaaah) but i think ill use an actual font if other characters are talking. Ya know, to get that mad contrast haha. Not sure what ill do about sound effects, i find they look dorky anyway so i might just keep scribbling them anywau cause they look stupid pffft hahaha
So keen to get started on my first battle!!! Haw yeh
# 8
Posted:
Jun 5 2014, 08:11 PM
Great colors overall, very lively and you can really get the feel of the situation
What takes away from it is the typography. I think it would benefit to try different computer fonts for different sound effects, and if you're more ambitious you can draw them by hand.
Because the sound effects and the lettering was both done by hand, it feels like you're just 'reading words' on the sound effects instead of feeling any sort of impact.
That last panel is great, I think it would make a really cute design for a Void Banner btw. I look forward to some epic battles!
What takes away from it is the typography. I think it would benefit to try different computer fonts for different sound effects, and if you're more ambitious you can draw them by hand.
Because the sound effects and the lettering was both done by hand, it feels like you're just 'reading words' on the sound effects instead of feeling any sort of impact.
That last panel is great, I think it would make a really cute design for a Void Banner btw. I look forward to some epic battles!
# 7
Posted:
Jun 3 2014, 08:03 PM
This looks hella! I would love to battle you in the future!
# 6
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Jun 3 2014, 06:40 PM
WOAH! I love the way you color! Already a fan of these two; can't wait to see their first challenge.
(watch out for anatomy though!)
(watch out for anatomy though!)
# 5
Posted:
Jun 3 2014, 05:33 PM
Awesome! Nice and beautiful piece of comic!: )
# 4
Posted:
Jun 3 2014, 05:22 PM
The BenT One: Zedan is fighting these two as soon as I get my shit together.
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oh yes yes yes please!!!
# 3
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Jun 3 2014, 05:02 PM
Zedan is fighting these two as soon as I get my shit together.
# 2
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Jun 3 2014, 02:52 PM
ah, where did you come from lol? This is great! what a fun character! Great colours, fun composition, enjoyable comic! Cant wait to see them in a battle!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 3 2014, 02:47 PM
I really enjoyed this and the characters. funny duo, and a great style.
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