Intro Story / Buck & Bones

Intro Story — Buck & Bones

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Sarawrawrawr
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7 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 12 2014, 03:34 PM
Psycho Sean: ha oh man this character looks like alot of fun! I Can't wait to see what shenanigans you put her in.
The intro itself is pretty good too, hardly any dialogue but still telling the story visually good on ya.

Though I would like another comic explaining why theirs a crocodile hiding within a sand trap in the middle of no where waiting for someone to mistake it for a mirage... it's so stupid it's brilliant! I love comics
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Haha stupid is my specialty

Sean Patrick Kelly
Artist
117 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 10 2014, 10:06 PM
ha oh man this character looks like alot of fun! I Can't wait to see what shenanigans you put her in.
The intro itself is pretty good too, hardly any dialogue but still telling the story visually good on ya.

Though I would like another comic explaining why theirs a crocodile hiding within a sand trap in the middle of no where waiting for someone to mistake it for a mirage... it's so stupid it's brilliant! I love comics

Harkill
4 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 8 2014, 03:20 AM
HAHA, I don't know what's going on here but I LOVE the style! And those boobs... are just perfect... I would like to give you critique or advices, but I'm too amazed by the playful style to say something.... Seriously can't wait to see more from you!

Sarawrawrawr
Artist
7 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 6 2014, 07:38 AM
Hah thanks pockey!
I did consider going all out with fonts amd sound effects for this, but decided against it cause stylisticly shes so brutish i almost wanted the whole comic to have a rough feel (thats why my borders look shite too hahaaah) but i think ill use an actual font if other characters are talking. Ya know, to get that mad contrast haha. Not sure what ill do about sound effects, i find they look dorky anyway so i might just keep scribbling them anywau cause they look stupid pffft hahaha

So keen to get started on my first battle!!! Haw yeh

Pennydox
Artist
235 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 5 2014, 08:11 PM
Great colors overall, very lively and you can really get the feel of the situation
What takes away from it is the typography. I think it would benefit to try different computer fonts for different sound effects, and if you're more ambitious you can draw them by hand.
Because the sound effects and the lettering was both done by hand, it feels like you're just 'reading words' on the sound effects instead of feeling any sort of impact.

That last panel is great, I think it would make a really cute design for a Void Banner btw. I look forward to some epic battles!

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 08:03 PM
This looks hella! I would love to battle you in the future!

Hobbittastic
Artist
164 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 06:40 PM
WOAH! I love the way you color! Already a fan of these two; can't wait to see their first challenge.
(watch out for anatomy though!)

K.G.
Artist
23 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 05:33 PM
Awesome! Nice and beautiful piece of comic!: )

Sarawrawrawr
Artist
7 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 05:22 PM
The BenT One: Zedan is fighting these two as soon as I get my shit together.
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oh yes yes yes please!!!

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 05:02 PM
Zedan is fighting these two as soon as I get my shit together.

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 02:52 PM
ah, where did you come from lol? This is great! what a fun character! Great colours, fun composition, enjoyable comic! Cant wait to see them in a battle!

Black Spaghetti
Artist
23 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 3 2014, 02:47 PM
I really enjoyed this and the characters.  funny duo, and a great style.

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