Nascence / Kars vs. Princess Edu

Nascence — Kars vs. Princess Edu

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Black Spaghetti
Artist
23 comments
# 16   Posted: Jul 19 2014, 11:22 AM
thanks for the feedback again, this helps me a lot in future developments.  I'll continue to keep working to improve.  I look forward to the next one.  Also on a side note I purposely ended where I ended, however after reading your critiques I can see your points.  I'll also work on line variation to help with being able to read the chaos in my panels.

Kozispoon
Artist
1210 comments
# 15   Posted: Jul 18 2014, 10:17 PM
TDK- While I feel your comic was a bit on the rough side, visually, I found myself completely overlooking that once I started reading. HIARIOUS comic! :D These are the battles I live for when it comes to Void fights. The punchlines, and even nudges past the fourth wall were really great. I especially dug the jab at the fact Princess Edu was a new fighter via the obvious review of Vwitter, haha! For such a spooky and serious looking character you seriously knew how to bring on the funny and I love that. Bravo!

BLACK SPAGHETTI- Heyo hey and congrats on your first battle! Couldn't of asked for a better match up. Right off the bat, its obvious to made the most of your month to make this comic. Your pages are lovely and your panels are detailed (Maybe too much?) I especially dug the panel where Kars is meandering in Edu's belly. Talk about your intestinal parasites! While each page was a visual treat, I feel your story was lacking-or maybe didn't finish? We're left being introduced to a cool looking artifact and we don't see it action? I grieve.

Regardless, visually your comic was killer, and once you get your storytelling on par you are going to be one formidable voider.

Gregly
Artist
180 comments
# 14   Posted: Jul 18 2014, 08:51 PM
TDK- your comics always make me happy. i like how edu feels bored by the situation at first as if it's happened many times before. edu being saddened was great to, but my favorite part was 'stop ron from- dangit ron!' hilarious. keep it up!

Spaghetti- nice first battle, you obviously didn't wrap it up at the end but i feel you could have in four weeks... or at least uploaded some sketches to finish the story. the only complaint about the art i have is that i couldn't read the action in page 3 panel 6 where she eats him the first time through, but that might have to do with kars's weird silhouette. i like how squishy and expressive everyone looks in your style!

Sean Patrick Kelly
Artist
117 comments
# 13   Posted: Jul 17 2014, 10:27 AM
"Man with this powerful relic someone could lead an army or something, good thing i found it" outloud in front of two possibly powerful agents of evil, dammit KARS!

Julz
Artist
409 comments
# 12   Posted: Jul 15 2014, 07:33 PM
TDK I loved that comic it had just enough depth and intrigue.
Black spaghetti your style rocks but I feel like there should be more to it? Like I'm all curious about this artifact now and I want to know more. Like all that happened was he wanted an artifact so he got it. There wasn't much else to it. I hope there is a second part.

Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 15 2014, 02:14 AM
TDK, this is probably my fave comic by you to date. it is HILARIOUS. Not just bnecause I am partial to a bit of Spanish Inquisition :D

Spaghetti I love your style! Although sometimes it was a bit difficult for me to tell what was gpoing on, I second Animeshen's comments. Great first battle! :D

Black Spaghetti
Artist
23 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 14 2014, 08:28 PM
lol, I like how TDK did his story as well.  and yes I do have an DA, it's LocalNeoArcadian005, I think, it's been awhile.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 14 2014, 06:36 PM
Spaghetti: Nice opener. I feel like the first page needed something, some speech or text, but aside from that, was fun and solid comic. Thing that bothers me is that your style is super familiar. I feel like i've seen your work somewhere off void. Do you have a DA or something?

TDK: Good work. I like how you used the plot to bring Edu into void proper. X3 If you win, and I ever battle Spaghetti, I'll be sure to use this. X3

Black Spaghetti
Artist
23 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 14 2014, 10:52 AM
Thanks for all the feed back, ill keep all that in mind as i create more comics. This was fun to do

Animeshen
Artist
1453 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 12 2014, 02:26 PM
ah, Im so excited for this!! TDK, I really liked your story! I enjoyed Kars' prior relationship to the summoner, and how you gave Edu a moment of insecurity, which I thought was cute for a five story void beast of infinite hunger, hah! And of course the humor is great! Sometimes with your art theres a bit of a lack on line variation which makes it hard for me to follow the panelsl but this read very clearly. i think you did an outstanding job!
Spaghetti, welcome to Void! great first battle! I love how you draw Kars, and you have great gesture and expression! though Edu has all these details on her that sometimes make it a little hard to read her- I think a slightly broader line variation would help me read the main body from the smaller details? could just be me though. Your dialogue was funny and I liked the story but it was a bit abbreviated- the ending cut off right as he got the magic staff, and now I'm sitting here wondering, what does he do with it? what does she have to say that he found it in there? But in any case, great first show and I hope I get to battle you sometime!

Kozispoon
Artist
1210 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 11 2014, 06:22 PM
Aww snap- first blood. Go get 'em Princes Edu!

Black Spaghetti
Artist
23 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 11 2014, 04:28 PM
Submitted.  Interested to see what you did Ten Dead Kings.

Ten Dead Kings
Artist
269 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 10 2014, 09:16 AM
Uploaded. Looking forward to what you bringing Spaghetti.

DrasticFantastic
Artist
165 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 8 2014, 07:21 AM
Ok THIS is actually going to be fairly interesting...

Animeshen
Artist
1453 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 6 2014, 03:31 PM
AHHHHH awesome!!

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 6 2014, 01:38 PM
VOID is not ready for this battle...

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Jul 18th, 2014
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