NRG - keep going, every comic is so much better!

TDK - aieeeee Elle in love?! I want romance!! If you ever do a film adaptation of her adventures I'd cast Noomi Rapace as Elle.

NRG- by how easily elle gives up at the end it seems like you may have had to cut some pages. But even if you rushed it you still turned in a complete cohesive story, and i really like the effort you put into the backgrounds in this comic! i like the action shot on page four but the criminal is reacting in the wrong direction. One thing you should work on is splitting your sentences up into separate bubbles so that we're not reading big paragraphs at a time.

TDK- this comic is awsome. i realized the second time reading that the round word bubbles were elle's and the square ones were voron's, but i think you mixed it up in the bottom panel of page five. As usual i like your blacks, layouts and backgrounds, and how natural the dialogue is in all of your comics!

Yes, I really suggest a very long deadline for the next comic--long enough to really take your time and NOT RUSH.

Wei IngnanBOTH OF YOU STOP DOING ONE OR TWO WEEK CHALLENGES!!!!......ESPECIALLY YOU NRG!!!!!!....give yourselves the time to properly work on and finish your comics

Uploaded.  Unfortunately, it's rushed.

REMATCH!