Goddamn dude, if there was an award for "Most Improved" you'd totally be up there. It's seriously inspiring how much you work on your skills. I really love how you set-up your shots and move the story along. Like the top of page 3, with the shot into the glass, and the stuff in the foreground, and then the panel of the explosion. Ugh, I really love that sequence. Not that the comic isn't filled with great moments like that! I just had to choose something to bring up, cause otherwise I'll just be here blathering about how much I like it all. And the setting! Man, so cooooooooooool. I really really really really like this comic.

    You've always had a very angular, mechanical style, and I think it's cool that you're making it work for you, but I'd like to see you push your ability to create organic lines as well. A few contrasting organic structures, or even just organic details on your mechanical shapes, could really help to liven your art up. The few spots where you bring in more organic, flowing lines don't work as well as they should, like the smoke and the scientists clothes. Loosen up a little, and be confident.

It's so obvious that you spent a lot of time and effort on this *thumbs up*
And I was clicking on the 'next' page thing just to realize it was a hype too.
You have had this certain 'black and white lines only' style since forever, it's good you're refining it every time. One thing in the future I would recommend is practicing sound effects. For those rare moments you feel like sticking them in, it would benefit to give more motion to your work. Sometimes the lines feel really stiff, and what sound effects do sometimes is notify the viewer that something else is happening in the panel. For example, on page two/panel one, you can have a sound effect that indicates smoke coming out of the door or a sound effect that indicated that the door opening without actually drawing a panel of it happening. It would be wise to practice doing them over and over on another piece of paper (typography is very hard!). Hope this helps you in the future.

tight stuff TDK, you've come a long way since the first pages I've seen of you!

Yes, a hype that is more than one page! XD