Intro Story / Adamantine

Intro Story / Adamantine

Intro Story — Adamantine


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Puzzlething
Artist
457 comments
# 15   Posted: Jan 26 2014, 07:35 PM
Man, I totally didn't have the energy to critique tonight, thank god it was your comic up here Jong, so bootiful. Everytime I see your art it just makes me wanna add texture to everything, in the hope I could be even an ounce as hot as you.

Evi
Artist
110 comments
# 14   Posted: Jan 26 2014, 07:13 PM
Jong your inks are so beautiful ahh. I especially love page two's layout with the uniformed panels and all those different onomatopoeias, dat energy. Can't wait to see her in the tourney.

Chimaeric
Artist
247 comments
# 13   Posted: Jan 26 2014, 09:10 AM
thanks for all the encouraging, kind words folk! Hope to please with MoD. Stay tuned folks!

Field Marshal Lionel Forsythe W. Underwood XIII, GBE
Artist
136 comments
# 12   Posted: Jan 25 2014, 11:17 PM
This is why you are one of my favourite artists here in void. Simple, concise and damned well executed.

ultraman400
Artist
17 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 24 2014, 06:57 PM
Nice work.

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 23 2014, 01:02 AM
This looks so good, excited about more!

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 21 2014, 11:40 AM
It's a shame that it cuts off so suddenly, but these lines are s o l i d. Glad to see she's finally here!

G.Lo
Artist
103 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 20 2014, 07:04 AM
EAT FIST.

It's about time we see this little lady here :DD

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1436 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 20 2014, 06:46 AM
aaaawwww yeaaaaaaah

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 20 2014, 01:24 AM
Awesome short comics, but on the first page where she vroooms if you would like to show her ride (the speed line indicate it) I'd suggest placing her leg on bike's pedal or else that leg will break by the dragging force. I know that a straight lady leg is sexy, but sometimes sexy is illogical.

Monday
Artist
933 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 19 2014, 10:07 PM
GOOD.

Pennydox
Artist
235 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 19 2014, 07:08 PM
Your bio is so straightforward, really open to just about anything that could happen in void.
I loved your sound effects and the ending (lol, default boy). I think the sound effects overpower the image itself, but I don't know how I'd approach the solution. I don't think the situation fits for this particular comic, but making sound effect lettering emphasize the action would be cool too (like sharp lines on text to show more eccentric feeling while wavy lines show more slow effects).
I look forward to seeing your next comic!

RobThing
Artist
84 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 19 2014, 03:15 PM
It's well done, in the sense that it's pretty and I like the overall design and look of it. And I enjoy how you pretty much created void battles as an actual world- almost like some sort of game. But, maybe it's just me, but I don't really get a sense of her personality much? And that one page where she's beating up a whole bunch of different people, I didn't realize it was actually different people or what was going on, until I read through the page about three times. Otherwise though, well done!  ^.^

Atomicfish
Artist
116 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 19 2014, 02:58 PM
Eeeeee! Her whole concept reminds me of "No more Heroes", which I love. She's fantastic!

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
394 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 19 2014, 02:19 PM
O MY GOD I LOVE HER

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