Intro Story / Masukuda Hoppa Kuro

Intro Story / Masukuda Hoppa Kuro

Intro Story — Masukuda Hoppa Kuro


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Monday
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933 comments
# 13   Posted: Jan 2 2014, 10:27 PM
MY VIRGIN EYES

ultraman400
Artist
17 comments
# 12   Posted: Dec 19 2013, 01:11 AM
I love this. This is hilarious.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 11   Posted: Dec 18 2013, 01:18 PM
I was amused. Yeah, I agree about the rapid fire gags, but then I'm easily amused ^_^; But yes, it was a bit fast in it's pacing. Still, Looking back at your other stuff on the site so far, it looks like you can pace better normally. Thus I look forward to where you will take this madness.

And by the by, it wasn't all that much, but you are quite welcome. X3

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 18 2013, 12:08 PM
Alright, this isn't deviantart! Let's get some actual critiques in here outside of "THIS IS AMAZING!" we're all excited, but I'm sure underwood would appreciate some actual feedback.

Most of what I'm going to say is pretty much just a repeat of what I said when I approved you, but this thing needs actual critiques so let's do this! While I admire that you have decided to challenge yourself with all of the style shifts, I feel like they're happening so rapidly it's hard to keep track of things. I understood the gags, but they might be alienating to someone that isn't very familiar with anime/manga. I felt this relied too much on rapid fire gags, to the point where you never really gave me a chance to breath. I get that intro pages won't have the best pacing, but we all know this is more than 4 pages.

Mister Kent
Artist
945 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 18 2013, 07:34 AM
Thoroughly entertaining! :) Liked the Dr. Fabulous cameo, and all the crazy style changes!

Shen
Global Moderator
1282 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 17 2013, 09:39 PM
oh my god you did it hes actually in XD
WHAT IS THIS EVEN OH MY GOD

Sabulive
Artist
131 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 17 2013, 03:05 PM
what did I just read

Pocketmouse
Artist
92 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 17 2013, 08:12 AM
WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGG GGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

curse those lively mountains.

This was 100% worth the wait, Woodsy. I cannot wait to see where this goes next. Your comics have impeccable timing- the stylistic changes and nods to the various influences i found to be thoroughly enjoyable! GJ GRANDPOPS

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 17 2013, 12:28 AM
OH MY SWEET JESUS FINALLY. FINALLY. FINALLY IT'S HAPPENING FINALLY

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1436 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 16 2013, 10:10 PM
what is going on XD

please keep going on

Puzzlething
Artist
457 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 16 2013, 09:12 PM
A new Underwood character!? It really is the holidays! MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 16 2013, 08:46 PM
OH MY GOOD GOD IT'S HERE. AFTER ALL THESE YEARS.

Field Marshal Lionel Forsythe W. Underwood XIII, GBE
Artist
136 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 16 2013, 08:13 PM
Intense thanks to Slade for helping putting and arranging
 the pages in Photoshop. * 3*

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