Intro Story / Blackavar

Intro Story / Blackavar

Intro Story — Blackavar


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Con
Artist
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# 10   Posted: Nov 25 2013, 11:28 PM
I love it when they have an angle coming in. Can't wait to see where he goes.

grdsinclair
1 comment
# 9   Posted: Nov 25 2013, 05:04 AM
The intro is great!!!

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1077 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 25 2013, 04:24 AM
So many new folks just coming on in- how exciting!

I'm always interested when fighters that buck the norm get approved. This guy seems entirely out of his element coming from what looks like the hills from the sound of music, to harsh, nature less VOID city, but you totally make it work in your intro. I certainly hope to see a first battle with you soon and will definitely echo the anticipation everyone else seems to be feeling between you and G.Lo. welcome aboard!

William_Duel
Community Manager
929 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 23 2013, 10:29 AM
Congratulations!  

I didn't get an opportunity to critique while this was in approvals so I'll do it now.  The amount of effort here was definitely good and a guaranteed entry into void as evident effort as opposed to skill is what mods look for.  But as you continue I hope there are a few things  you'll continue to work on.  Keep in mind that the more zoomed in we are the more errors will be evident especially with line quality.  That first panel is a bit weak in regards to quality and the blue design that subsequently follows needed more cleanup in
Post production.  For your characters continue anatomy practice and watch out for the hips, they're much smaller than they need to be.  For shading, that muddy style of shading is hard to pull off especially when you have these solid color flats with saturated color.  Break out the magic wand and try some cell shading.  Look at this example of your current shading versus cell shading:
http://Http://Sammy-Harlan.documentary.com/art/Cell-Shading-Tutorial-286278504
Don't be afraid to use references for your backgrounds, they will become stronger as a result.  Good luck and I wish you success on your first battle which is hopefully soon.

Crafty
Artist
65 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 22 2013, 08:38 PM
Congrats on getting in, Momo! I told you he would accept him! I can't wait for comics!

Puzzlething
Artist
457 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 22 2013, 06:08 PM
Haha man, that was fast! You were in approvals for like a second.

And man, the second I saw this character I knew G.lo was gonna be in love.

Mister Kent
Artist
946 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 22 2013, 04:22 PM
Great concept and execution. And yeah you and G.Lo would be quite a match :3 Welcome to Void!

G.Lo
Artist
103 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 22 2013, 04:14 PM
....Oh my god I need to do some fan art.

Welcome! Looking forward to seeing more stuff! :D

Bobo
Web Dev
924 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 22 2013, 03:53 PM
Yay! Welcome!!!!

Dechado
Artist
246 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 22 2013, 03:10 PM
Blackie Butts.

I mean, congratulation son getting in. Glad you finally decided to jump in and join us all.

When I saw Blackavar's icon, I might have jumped a bit on my chair.
Looking forward to see more from you, momo!

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