TDK I agree with Puzzle - nice setup, but hopefully we get a more complete comic next time, eh?

MrNoitaull          -

                    It sucks that you weren't in a spot you could upload this at the deadline dude. I think I'd just die of frustration if that happened to me. Hope we see everything you worked so hard on soon!


TDK           -

          I really like the mod and pacing in this comic. I wish it was done/complete because I really liked how everything was playing out. The setting has so much character. The background is flat, and often shot strait on without any perspective, but there's still so much great personality in everything.

       Your shadows feel a little flat sometimes, like they're not bending around the shape underneath. Have you ever tried drawing the shadows as like a shape/hollow outline before hand, filling it in later? It can make it a little easier to make it conform to the form of your subjects.

mrnoiaull: Guess we'll see what you got soon, make it count!

TDK: The story got me interested, and the book burning library is a pretty detailed setting that you got fairly well across.The heavy blacks were nice too, though it was a little give and take, they seemed to add depth only slightly more often than they flattened it. You may wanna try adding little white outlines on certain otherwise all black shapes to lend more spacial depth to them. Endshark, Kura, and Geeps have pretty good examples of what I mean, I think.

I've already uploaded what I've done, sorry. I'll be looking forward to the BB, though.


(actual time I spent on this, counting by the hours? 1 or 2 weeks, tops.)

TDK, if you see this I wont be in an area where I can submit my pages this weekend. So can we plase postpone the battle, otherwise Ill have to submit as a BB. I'd hate for it to edn as such, but I know that I wont be able to.

OOH nice! Been waiting for more from both these characters! Good luck guys!