Ah... Cuisses de grenouilles sont les choses les plus delicieux de la planete. Oui?
I do love this character. I hope to battle again soon on the site with this charming little character of yours.
Intro Story / Roger Ribbit
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Jul 12 2013, 05:35 AM
# 8
Posted:
Jul 11 2013, 12:56 PM
It would have been cooler if the masked dudes were the ones to eat his legs! Hahaha
Good job though, keep at it
Good job though, keep at it
# 7
Posted:
Jul 11 2013, 04:20 AM
hahahahaha "time to do what your kind does best and croak"
that was tremendously entertaining, i love roger! the one thing i'd suggest is making sure his eyes are consistently expressive. in some panels i can pick up on his emotions easily just based on the big froggy eyes (like when he falls off the roof) but some are more unclear, like when he's yelling in anger on the last page but his eyes/mouth look sort of happy?
idk but i want to battle him now so your comic is a success
that was tremendously entertaining, i love roger! the one thing i'd suggest is making sure his eyes are consistently expressive. in some panels i can pick up on his emotions easily just based on the big froggy eyes (like when he falls off the roof) but some are more unclear, like when he's yelling in anger on the last page but his eyes/mouth look sort of happy?
idk but i want to battle him now so your comic is a success
# 6
Posted:
Jul 10 2013, 10:06 PM
Lol nice! Great name, great quirky story, and who would regret giant frog leg dinners?
# 5
Posted:
Jul 10 2013, 09:46 PM
I already like this character! Welcome to Void, man, and can't wait to see what you make!
# 4
Posted:
Jul 10 2013, 09:06 PM
This character has humor and guts ! I'm really digging it.
# 3
Posted:
Jul 10 2013, 02:37 AM
This character looks AWESOME! Perspective, proportions and lineweight could use some work but you are well on your way to comic-stardom (if there is such a thing..)!
# 2
Posted:
Jul 9 2013, 07:57 PM
I'm not a scumbag ;o;.
Nice comic, I really enjoyed this. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Nice comic, I really enjoyed this. Can't wait to see what you do next.
# 1
Posted:
Jul 9 2013, 07:19 PM
Since no-one's commented, I'll be the first to do so! First of all, welcome to Void. I dig your character and your color palette a lot here, and you've got some pretty clean linework as well.
I'd say that you should probably work on your perspective and three-dimensional rendering a bit more--the sidewalk and building on the first page in the fiirst panel doesn't quite match up with the street behind it, or seem to sit on the same plane. Some parts of buildings and backgrounds in other panels on other pages appear to be flatter than they should be as well.
I'd also suggest experimenting more with "turning the camera" and having less face-on closeups in small panels. It makes some scenes feel very easy to overlook, or takes out the impact of some panels.
Aside from that, it's good to see that you've dove right in. Good luck with your battles!
I'd say that you should probably work on your perspective and three-dimensional rendering a bit more--the sidewalk and building on the first page in the fiirst panel doesn't quite match up with the street behind it, or seem to sit on the same plane. Some parts of buildings and backgrounds in other panels on other pages appear to be flatter than they should be as well.
I'd also suggest experimenting more with "turning the camera" and having less face-on closeups in small panels. It makes some scenes feel very easy to overlook, or takes out the impact of some panels.
Aside from that, it's good to see that you've dove right in. Good luck with your battles!
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